Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific details. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to sound more natural. Also, use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually look for new designs online. If I find a pair I like, I often purchase them.

제안: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about your experience. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms.

예시: Yes, last month I browsed online and found a pair of Nike shoes that I really liked. They were blue with black soles, which made them look very stylish.

제안: Make sure to answer directly and clearly. Avoid unclear words like 'Buzzard' which seems incorrect. Use complete sentences and explain your answer with specific details.

예시: The amount I spend on shoes depends on my budget. Usually, I try to buy good quality shoes without spending too much.

제안: Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Provide clear reasons and examples to support your preference.

예시: It depends on the occasion. Usually, I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them for running and work. However, for special events or festivals, I choose fashionable shoes to look stylish.

× I am very sophisticated persons

✓ I am a very sophisticated person

The subject 'I' is singular, so the noun 'persons' should be singular 'person' to agree in number. Also, 'a' is needed before 'very sophisticated person' as it is a singular countable noun phrase.

× I usually search on the Internet for new design for the footwear

✓ I usually search on the Internet for new designs for footwear

The noun 'design' should be plural 'designs' because it refers to multiple new styles. Also, 'footwear' is uncountable and does not need 'the' before it.

× If I like something, uh, I definitely buy some

✓ If I like something, uh, I definitely buy some

No correction needed here as 'some' refers to an unspecified plural quantity and is appropriate.

× I saw on one pair of the shoes that is from Nike brand

✓ I saw one pair of shoes that is from the Nike brand

The phrase 'on one pair of the shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'one pair of shoes'. Also, 'the Nike brand' requires the definite article 'the' before 'Nike brand'.

× It is a really pretty shoes

✓ They are really pretty shoes

The subject 'It' is singular but 'shoes' is plural. The correct subject pronoun is 'They' and the verb should be plural 'are'.

× I love that that one is in the blue, in the color and having a black soul

✓ I love that one in the blue colour and having a black sole

'The blue' should be 'blue' without 'the'. 'Colour' is the correct spelling in Canadian English. 'Soul' is incorrect; the correct word is 'sole' for the bottom of a shoe.

× I when I browse on the Internet for footwear

✓ when I browsed on the Internet for footwear

The past tense 'browsed' is needed here to match the past time reference 'in the last month'.

× It is a really pretty shoes

✓ They are really pretty shoes

The subject 'It' is singular but 'shoes' is plural. The correct subject pronoun is 'They' and the verb should be plural 'are'.

× I saw on one pair of the shoes

✓ I saw one pair of shoes

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The phrase should be 'I saw one pair of shoes'.

× I love that that one is in the blue, in the color and having a black soul

✓ I love that one in blue colour and having a black sole

The repeated 'that' is redundant. Also, 'in the blue, in the color' is awkward; 'in blue colour' is clearer. 'Soul' should be 'sole'.

× Well, it's depend on the Buzzard, sometime some, well, it depends on the budget

✓ Well, it depends on the budget

'It's depend' is incorrect; the verb should be 'depends' to agree with 'it'. 'Buzzard' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'budget'. The phrase 'sometime some' is unclear and unnecessary.

× Well, it's depend on the Buzzard, sometime some, well, it depends on the budget

✓ Well, it depends on the budget

No modal verb is needed here; the main verb 'depends' is sufficient. The sentence should be simplified for clarity.

× Usually I I prefer comfortable shoes because most of the time I like to wear comfortable shoes because it's really handy to for running and for going to work

✓ Usually, I prefer comfortable shoes because most of the time I like to wear them as they are really handy for running and going to work

The modal verb 'like to' is correct but the sentence is repetitive. 'It's really handy to for running' is incorrect; 'handy for running' is correct. Also, 'I I' is a repetition error.

× because it's really handy to for running and for going to work

✓ because it's really handy for running and going to work

The preposition 'to' before 'for running' is incorrect and should be removed.

× But if I talk about the fashionable, it's I I prefer to wear fashionable for some occasions or festivals

✓ But if I talk about fashionable shoes, I prefer to wear them for some occasions or festivals

'The fashionable' is incomplete; it should be 'fashionable shoes'. The repeated 'I I' is an error. 'Wear fashionable' is incorrect; 'wear them' refers to shoes.