Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answerは自然ですが、"I'm I'm"や"for for"のような繰り返しを避け、より簡潔に話す練習をしましょう。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使って文をつなげると、より効果的です。

예시: No, I don't really like buying shoes and seldom do so because I'm not fond of shopping, and I prefer to use my shoes for a long time.

제안: 回答が途中で切れているため、文を完結させる練習が必要です。また、"brick and mortar stores"の後に続く内容を明確にし、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いです。

예시: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer going to brick and mortar stores to try them on and check their size and texture, which is more reliable.

제안: 繰り返し（"I I I"）や文の途中で終わっている点を改善しましょう。具体的な金額や頻度を加えると内容が豊かになります。

예시: Well, I rarely spend much money on shoes because I'm quite frugal and prefer durable ones that last a long time, usually spending around $50 to $70.

제안: "prefer to comfortable shoes"は文法的に正しくないので"prefer comfortable shoes"に直しましょう。繰り返しを避け、理由を明確に述べると良いです。

예시: Definitely, I prefer comfortable shoes because I don't care much about appearance and I focus on durability and good quality.

× I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer going brick and mortar stores and.

✓ I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer going to brick and mortar stores and

The verb 'prefer' is usually followed by 'to' plus the base verb or by the gerund form. Here, 'going' should be followed by the preposition 'to' to indicate the destination, so 'going to brick and mortar stores' is correct.

× I prefer to comfortable shoes.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes.

The verb 'prefer' is directly followed by the object without 'to' when the object is a noun phrase. 'To' is unnecessary here and makes the sentence ungrammatical.