Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có lỗi lặp từ "once once a year". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually buy a new pair once a year because they are practical and add a fashionable touch to my holiday outfits.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như "give me a ideal course" không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online since grade 8 because it offers many choices and discounts that I can use to save money.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "millions thousand" và "coast" thay vì "cost". Bạn nên sử dụng từ chính xác và cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I usually spend between 100,000 and several million VND on a pair of shoes because I prioritize sustainability and durability over price.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và từ vựng sai như "shows" thay vì "shoes", "rented tours" không đúng nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và sử dụng từ đúng, đồng thời cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them to school every day and they prevent my feet from hurting, but I also like fashionable ones.

× Yes, I prefer buying shoes a lot and I usually buy shoes once once a year because I find it is really a practical item and also a fashionable touch to my outfit in the holiday.

✓ Yes, I prefer buying shoes a lot and I usually buy shoes once a year because I find they are really practical items and also add a fashionable touch to my outfit during the holidays.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it is' referring to 'shoes' which is plural, so 'they are' is correct (Singular and plural issue). Also, 'a practical item' should be plural 'practical items' to match 'shoes'. The phrase 'a fashionable touch to my outfit in the holiday' is awkward; 'add a fashionable touch to my outfit during the holidays' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, since I was in grade 8, I usually purchase my shoes in advance. The reason is it offers me numerous choices and also give me a ideal course and also many vouchers that I can apply in the deal.

✓ Yes, since I was in grade 8, I usually purchase my shoes in advance. The reason is it offers me numerous choices and also gives me an ideal course and many vouchers that I can apply to the deal.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'it' (Third person singular issue). 'a ideal course' should be 'an ideal course' because 'ideal' starts with a vowel sound (Article errors). 'apply in the deal' should be 'apply to the deal' (Incorrect use of prepositions).

× It ranged from 100,000 to millions thousand per pair. I'm a person that will prioritize sustainability and durability over the coast, so I think that.

✓ It ranges from 100,000 to millions per pair. I'm a person who prioritizes sustainability and durability over the cost, so I think that.

The verb 'ranged' should be 'ranges' to match the present tense context (Present tense issue). 'millions thousand' is incorrect; 'millions' alone is sufficient (Incorrect use of quantifiers). 'coast' should be 'cost' (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'that will prioritize' should be 'who prioritizes' to correctly refer to a person and maintain subject-verb agreement (Incorrect use of pronouns and subject-verb agreement).

× When it comes to fashionable or comfortable shows, I rented tours comfortable shoes. The reason is I have to wear them daily to school so they can help me from being hurt. However, I also prefer fashionable.

✓ When it comes to fashionable or comfortable shoes, I prefer comfortable shoes. The reason is I have to wear them daily to school so they can help prevent me from getting hurt. However, I also prefer fashionable ones.

'shows' should be 'shoes' (Spelling error). 'rented tours comfortable shoes' is incorrect; likely intended 'prefer comfortable shoes' (Sentence structure errors). 'help me from being hurt' should be 'help prevent me from getting hurt' (Incorrect verb usage). 'prefer fashionable' should be 'prefer fashionable ones' to complete the comparison (Incorrect use of pronouns).