Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且有重复词汇。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且用更自然的表达方式说明购买鞋子的频率和原因。

예시: I don't like buying shoes very much. I usually buy one pair a year because I only need comfortable shoes for walking, not for collecting.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且有些重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online, especially during big sales. For example, there was a buy one get one free promotion, which made it very affordable. I also enjoy the convenience of shopping online.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，数字表达不准确。建议简化句子，明确表达花费金额和购买数量。

예시: As I mentioned, I don't buy shoes often. I usually spend about 3,000 to 5,000 NT dollars per year, which is enough for one or two pairs.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构，突出舒适鞋的重要性。

예시: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them for a long time, usually one to one and a half years. Comfort is the most important factor since I need to walk a lot.

× I don't really like buying shoes and I I often buy one pair of shoes for like once per year and because I think shoes is enough for a convenient and suitable for walk and not for any collection.

✓ I don't really like buying shoes and I often buy one pair of shoes about once per year because I think shoes are enough for convenience and suitable for walking, not for any collection.

这里'shoes'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。此外，句子中存在多余的重复词'I'，应删除。'for like once per year'表达不自然，改为'about once per year'更合适。'a convenient'应改为'convenience'，'suitable for walk'应改为'suitable for walking'。

× Yes, I have bought shoes online before, especially when there's big sales.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online before, especially when there are big sales.

'sales'是复数，'there is'应改为'there are'以保持主谓一致。

× I definitely prefer a comfortable shoes because I'll use that shoes for very long time like 1 or maybe one or a half of year and the the convenient is the most important aspect I consider because I need to walk with them.

✓ I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I'll use those shoes for a very long time, like one or maybe one and a half years, and convenience is the most important aspect I consider because I need to walk with them.

'a comfortable shoes'中'shoes'是复数，前面不应加不定冠词'a'，应改为'comfortable shoes'。'that shoes'应改为'those shoes'以指代复数。'a half of year'应改为'one and a half years'。'the convenient'应改为'convenience'。