Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, I like buying shoes because now there are many types and kinds of shoes that I feel very pretty and beautiful. Also my feet are very big so they need to change shoes frequently. So I really like to buying shoes, especially the sandals.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
No, I haven't ever bought shoes online because I afraid that the size of the shoes is not fit with my fits because my size of feet is quite big. So I have to go to the shop and try it by myself, not go online and choose.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
When I buying shoes I aim to spend $400,000 for once because it's very expensive to buy many kind of shoes so I have to save my money to do another things, not just buy the shoes.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I prefer to choose the comfortable shoes because I'm usually go to school and I have to wear a comfortable shoes to join the class activities and the PE lesson. So if I have to choose, I still choose the comfortable shoes. But sometimes I would like to try fashionable shoes.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "I feel very pretty and beautiful" (một cách diễn đạt không phù hợp với chủ thể là giày), bạn nên nói về kiểu dáng hoặc mẫu mã giày. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến việc sử dụng thì và cấu trúc câu chính xác.
예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because there are many stylish designs available nowadays. Since I have large feet, I need to replace my shoes quite often. I especially like buying sandals because they are comfortable and suitable for warm weather.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 75.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là việc sử dụng mạo từ và giới từ, cũng như cách diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, "I afraid" nên là "I am afraid" hoặc "I'm worried". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung có liên kết logic.
예시: No, I have never bought shoes online because I am worried that the size might not fit my large feet. Therefore, I prefer to visit the store and try the shoes on before buying.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 65.0제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chính xác hơn, ví dụ "When I buying shoes" nên là "When I buy shoes". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý rõ ràng về số tiền và lý do chi tiêu.
예시: When I buy shoes, I usually spend around 400,000 VND each time because shoes can be quite expensive. I try to save money for other things instead of buying too many pairs.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 80.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ "I'm usually go" nên là "I usually go" và "a comfortable shoes" nên là "comfortable shoes" (không dùng mạo từ với danh từ số nhiều). Bạn cũng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually go to school and need to participate in class activities and PE lessons. Therefore, comfort is very important to me. However, sometimes I like to try fashionable shoes for special occasions.
문법
× So I really like to buying shoes, especially the sandals.
✓ So I really like buying shoes, especially sandals.
The verb 'like' is followed directly by the gerund form without 'to'. The phrase 'like to buying' is incorrect; it should be 'like buying'. Also, 'the sandals' is better as 'sandals' here because it refers to sandals in general.
× No, I haven't ever bought shoes online because I afraid that the size of the shoes is not fit with my fits because my size of feet is quite big.
✓ No, I haven't ever bought shoes online because I am afraid that the size of the shoes does not fit my feet because my feet are quite big.
The pronoun 'I' needs the verb 'am' to form 'I am afraid'. 'Fits' is incorrect; the plural 'feet' should be used. Also, 'is not fit with my fits' is incorrect; it should be 'does not fit my feet'.
× So I have to go to the shop and try it by myself, not go online and choose.
✓ So I have to go to the shop and try them by myself, not go online and choose.
The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'shoes' which is plural, so 'them' should be used.
× When I buying shoes I aim to spend $400,000 for once because it's very expensive to buy many kind of shoes so I have to save my money to do another things, not just buy the shoes.
✓ When I buy shoes I aim to spend $400,000 at once because it's very expensive to buy many kinds of shoes so I have to save my money to do other things, not just buy shoes.
The phrase 'When I buying' is incorrect; it should be 'When I buy'. 'For once' is better expressed as 'at once'. 'Many kind of shoes' should be 'many kinds of shoes' to agree in number. 'Another things' should be 'other things'. Also, 'the shoes' is unnecessary here.
× I prefer to choose the comfortable shoes because I'm usually go to school and I have to wear a comfortable shoes to join the class activities and the PE lesson.
✓ I prefer to choose comfortable shoes because I usually go to school and I have to wear comfortable shoes to join class activities and the PE lesson.
'I'm usually go' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually go'. 'A comfortable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; it should be 'comfortable shoes'. Also, 'the comfortable shoes' is better as 'comfortable shoes' when speaking generally.
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