Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ (ví dụ: 'I I refer to spend'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và tránh lặp lại từ 'shoes' quá nhiều.

예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes occasionally, especially when I have some extra money. I usually purchase them for work or school. However, I tend to spend more on clothes or books rather than shoes.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng, ví dụ như 'I the price are more affordable'. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lặp từ 'price' quá nhiều.

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online, especially from popular apps like TikTok Shopping and others. The prices are usually more affordable, and it's very convenient because I can compare different options without leaving my home.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ 'stable money' và 'which he can use'. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý muốn nói.

예시: I buy shoes occasionally, so I don't spend a fixed amount. Usually, I invest in good quality shoes that are durable and can last a long time.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên, ví dụ 'I quite active' và 'comfortable shoes is better'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ 'comfortable' quá nhiều.

예시: I am quite active and enjoy exercising, so I prefer comfortable shoes. They are suitable for activities like walking or running and help me feel at ease throughout the day.

× However, I don't spend money on shoes because I I refer to spend my money on other things like clothes or books for example.

✓ However, I don't spend money on shoes because I prefer to spend my money on other things like clothes or books, for example.

The phrase 'I I refer to spend' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'I prefer to spend'. The pronoun 'I' is repeated unnecessarily and 'refer to spend' is not the correct verb phrase. The verb 'prefer' should be used with 'to' plus the base verb 'spend'.

× Yes I have bought shoes online before especially from popular apps like shopping Tiktok, Shop iPhone shopping online because I the price are more affordable and it's really convenient because I can see the price and compare the price without leaving my home.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online before, especially from popular apps like TikTok Shopping and iPhone Shopping online because the prices are more affordable and it's really convenient since I can see and compare prices without leaving my home.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors: 'the price are' should be 'the prices are' because 'prices' is plural. Also, 'I the price' is incorrect and should be removed. Proper nouns like 'TikTok Shopping' should be capitalized and phrased correctly. The sentence is also improved for clarity and fluency.

× I just bought my shoe occasionally so I don't usually spend stable money for my shoes.

✓ I just buy shoes occasionally, so I don't usually spend a fixed amount of money on my shoes.

The phrase 'my shoe' is singular but should be plural 'shoes' to match the context. Also, 'spend stable money' is incorrect; 'stable' is not used to describe money spent. 'A fixed amount of money' is more appropriate. The verb tense is adjusted to present simple to match 'occasionally'.

× I often buy a good quality shoes which he can use for a long time and durable.

✓ I often buy good quality shoes which I can use for a long time and that are durable.

'A good quality shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'he can use' is incorrect pronoun usage; it should be 'I can use'. The sentence is corrected for plural agreement and pronoun consistency.

× I often buy a good quality shoes which he can use for a long time and durable.

✓ I often buy good quality shoes which I can use for a long time and that are durable.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrectly used to refer to the speaker. It should be 'I' to match the subject. Also, the adjective 'durable' needs a verb to connect it properly, so 'that are durable' is added.

× I quite active and I like exercise so I will choose a comfortable shoes because it is suitable for activities such as working or running and in this additionally comfortable shoes is better because it makes me feel comfortable.

✓ I am quite active and I like exercising, so I will choose comfortable shoes because they are suitable for activities such as walking or running. Additionally, comfortable shoes are better because they make me feel comfortable.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I' to form the present tense 'I am'. 'Exercise' should be in gerund form 'exercising' after 'like'. 'A comfortable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and should not have 'a'. Pronouns and verbs are corrected for agreement and clarity. 'Working' is likely a typo for 'walking' in this context.