Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りがあります。また、理由の説明が曖昧で具体性に欠けています。より自然で効果的な答え方として、頻度と理由を明確に述べ、簡潔にまとめることが重要です。

예시: I don't particularly enjoy buying shoes, so I usually only buy them once a year when I really need a new pair.

제안: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。オンラインでの購入経験について直接的に答え、条件文を使う場合は正しい文法で表現しましょう。

예시: No, I have never bought shoes online, but if I learn how to do it properly, I would like to try.

제안: 金額の表現が不自然で、意味不明なフレーズが含まれています。金額を明確に述べ、不要な表現は避けましょう。

예시: I usually spend around 5000 yen a year on shoes, as I don't buy them very often.

제안: 文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。好みを明確に述べ、その理由を具体的に説明しましょう。

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often work around the house and need something practical.

× No, actually I don't like to buy shoes.

✓ No, actually I don't like buying shoes.

The verb 'like' is commonly followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing general preferences. Using 'like to buy' is not incorrect but less natural in this context. Using 'like buying' sounds more fluent and idiomatic.

× But then once a year because I feel boring.

✓ But I buy them once a year because I feel bored.

The original sentence uses 'then' incorrectly and 'feel boring' is incorrect because 'boring' describes something that causes boredom, not the feeling itself. The correct expression is 'feel bored' to describe the speaker's feeling. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× No, I haven't found shoes online.

✓ No, I haven't bought shoes online.

The verb 'found' is incorrect here because the question is about purchasing shoes online, not finding them. The correct past participle is 'bought' for the verb 'buy' to indicate the action of purchasing.

× But if I know how to buy in the Internet, I try to do.

✓ But if I knew how to buy on the Internet, I would try to do it.

The sentence requires the second conditional to express a hypothetical situation. 'If I know' should be 'If I knew' and 'I try' should be 'I would try'. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'on the Internet' is the correct usage.

× But if I know how to buy in the Internet, I try to do.

✓ But if I knew how to buy on the Internet, I would try to do it.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to the Internet. The correct preposition is 'on'. This correction is combined with the modal verb usage correction above.

× I usually spend on around 5000 a year for shoes.

✓ I usually spend around 5000 a year on shoes.

The preposition 'on' should come after the amount spent, not before. The correct phrase is 'spend around 5000 a year on shoes'.

× Yeah, I feel that. I stab stabbed my money.

✓ Yeah, I feel that. I wasted my money.

The phrase 'I stab stabbed my money' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'I wasted my money'. 'Wasted' is the correct past tense verb to express spending money carelessly.

× I'm for comfortable shoes to show shoes because I usually work around my house so.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes to showy shoes because I usually work around my house.

The phrase 'I'm for' is informal and less appropriate here; 'I prefer' is better. 'Show shoes' is unclear; likely meant 'showy shoes'. The conjunction 'so' at the end is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.