Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, I often buy shoes once a month and I usually select a select them according to its color and size. I prefer to selecting the black shoes.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yes, I always bought shoes online because I think it cannot need to go outdoors to buy it and eat comfortable for my life.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I often spend on shoes from 400 to ¥600 which can be able to afford according my week.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually go work by bus and the comfortable shoes can make me feel relaxed and work long time.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和动词形式的正确使用。
예시: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually buy a pair once a month. I choose them based on color and size, and I prefer black shoes.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，明确说明网上购物的便利性。
예시: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is convenient and I don't need to go outside, which makes my life easier.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中语法和表达不准确，建议使用正确的句型表达价格范围，并说明预算来源。
예시: I usually spend between 400 and 600 yuan on shoes, which fits within my weekly budget.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和用词有待改进。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子流畅性。
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually take the bus to work, and comfortable shoes help me feel relaxed and work longer.
문법
× I prefer to selecting the black shoes.
✓ I prefer selecting the black shoes.
动词prefer后面接动名词形式（-ing），而不是不定式to + 动词原形。这里应使用selecting。
× I always bought shoes online because I think it cannot need to go outdoors to buy it and eat comfortable for my life.
✓ I always buy shoes online because I think I don't need to go outdoors to buy them and it is comfortable for my life.
句子中时态不一致，前半句用过去时bought不合适，应使用一般现在时buy，因为表达的是习惯行为。
× I always bought shoes online because I think it cannot need to go outdoors to buy it and eat comfortable for my life.
✓ I always buy shoes online because I think I don't need to go outdoors to buy them and it is comfortable for my life.
代词使用错误，shoes是复数，应该用复数代词them代替it。
× I often spend on shoes from 400 to ¥600 which can be able to afford according my week.
✓ I often spend from ¥400 to ¥600 on shoes, which I can afford according to my weekly budget.
表达金额范围时应使用from...to结构，且介词使用错误，应该用according to。
× I often spend on shoes from 400 to ¥600 which can be able to afford according my week.
✓ I often spend from ¥400 to ¥600 on shoes, which I can afford according to my weekly budget.
介词使用错误，应该用according to表示“根据”。
× I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually go work by bus and the comfortable shoes can make me feel relaxed and work long time.
✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually go to work by bus and comfortable shoes can make me feel relaxed and work for a long time.
go后面需要加介词to表示去某地，且表达持续时间时应加介词for。
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