Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
No, I don't like buying shoes because it needs more time. So so big time and it is so boring for me. This process is not for me.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yes uh, I have often bought shoes online uh specifically, do you know about the app Tamil uh, this is so convenient for me because uh, this time you have a chance uh to choose uh choose for you.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
My budget for shoes is UH-15 to 100 lorry.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
Comfort is the most important thing for me, so I certainly consider that comfortable shoes is more important for me than fashionable shoes.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 55.0제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repetition like "so so big time" and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to provide a clearer reason or example to support your opinion.
예시: No, I don't like buying shoes because it takes a lot of time and I find the process quite boring. For example, I prefer shopping online where I can browse quickly without going to the store.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 50.0제안: Try to avoid filler words like "uh" and be more precise in your explanation. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific details about why the app is convenient.
예시: Yes, I often buy shoes online, especially using the Tamil app. It is very convenient because it offers a wide selection and helps me choose the right size easily.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 30.0제안: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Please provide a clear and specific amount in your answer. Avoid filler sounds and make sure your vocabulary is accurate and relevant.
예시: I usually spend between 15 and 100 dollars on shoes, depending on the brand and quality.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a reason or example to support your preference.
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them for long hours. Although fashionable shoes look nice, comfort is more important to me.
문법
× No, I don't like buying shoes because it needs more time.
✓ No, I don't like buying shoes because it takes more time.
The verb 'needs' is incorrectly used here; 'take' is the correct verb to express the amount of time required for an activity. The modal verb usage is related to expressing necessity or requirement, but in this context, 'take' is the appropriate verb to indicate duration.
× So so big time and it is so boring for me.
✓ It takes so much time and it is so boring for me.
The phrase 'so so big time' is incorrect and unclear. The correct quantifier to express a large amount of time is 'so much time'. This correction clarifies the meaning and uses the appropriate quantifier.
× Comfort is the most important thing for me, so I certainly consider that comfortable shoes is more important for me than fashionable shoes.
✓ Comfort is the most important thing for me, so I certainly consider that comfortable shoes are more important for me than fashionable shoes.
The subject 'comfortable shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error.
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