Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır, ancak "because" bağlacını tekrar kullanmak yerine farklı bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi çeşitlendirebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, cümlenizi biraz daha kısa ve öz tutmaya çalışın.

예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase a new pair about once a month since I play tennis, which causes my shoes to get dirty quickly.

제안: Cevabınız açık ve mantıklı, ancak "because" bağlacını kullanırken cümlenizi daha akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaç çeşitliliği ve daha kısa cümleler kullanabilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, I often buy shoes online since I prefer to avoid stores and unnecessary conversations when I'm just there to shop.

제안: Cevabınızda eksik kalan kısımlar var ve cümleler tamamlanmamış. Daha net ve tam cümleler kurarak, harcama miktarınızı açıkça belirtmelisiniz.

예시: It depends on the occasion. For special events like weddings, I might spend around 25,000 Turkish liras, but for everyday use at work or school, I usually spend much less.

제안: Cevabınız mantıklı ve iyi yapılandırılmış, ancak "or" bağlacını daha etkili kullanarak cümlelerinizi daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.

예시: It depends on the situation; for weddings or special events, I prefer fashionable shoes, but for daily use like going to school, I choose comfortable ones.

× I do like buying shoes and I'd say I would buy them once a month because my shoes are prone to get dirty faster because I play tennis.

✓ I do like buying shoes and I'd say I would buy them once a month because my shoes are prone to getting dirty faster because I play tennis.

The phrase 'prone to' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form (gerund). Therefore, 'get' should be corrected to 'getting'. This is a common grammatical structure where 'to' is a preposition, not part of an infinitive verb.

× I did buy shoes online.

✓ I have bought shoes online.

The question 'Have you ever bought shoes online?' requires a present perfect tense response to indicate experience up to now. 'I did buy' is simple past and less appropriate here; 'I have bought' correctly matches the present perfect question.

× If I'm using it for a fancy event like a wedding, I would say around 25,000 Turkish liras.

✓ If I'm using them for a fancy event like a wedding, I would say around 25,000 Turkish liras.

The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to 'shoes' which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them' to match the plural noun. This is a quantifier/pronoun agreement issue.

× If I'm going to use it regularly to my job or school, I'd probably spend.

✓ If I'm going to use them regularly for my job or school, I'd probably spend.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'for' when indicating purpose or use. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'.

× If I'm using it daily and going to school with the shoes, I'd say the comfortable ones.

✓ If I'm using them daily and going to school with the shoes, I'd say the comfortable ones.

Again, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'. This is a pronoun agreement issue related to prepositional phrases.