Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, I like to purchase my shoes because, uh, buying, uh, buying shoes can help me to, uh, relax my food more frequently because of my, my food is really large, as you can see. So, uh, I really like to buy the, the, the shoes and openly buy the shoes.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Well yes, I built a shoes online before but uh, it's quite a poor experience because it is quite too small for me. So I will not going to will and will not going to buy any shoes in the online in the future. It's too dangerous to not seeing the real shoes and not trying on before buying. It's too dangerous.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Umm, it based on how, uh, how I really like it uh, for example, I have a pair of shoes that cost me about like uh, 10,000 NT dollars, but the cheapest my shoes is about like only 900 NT dollars. So it's not really uh, steady, steady money. How much cost yeah.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I would like to say that I'm much more care about how comfortable it is, but it will based on if the shoes is not too old style or something else, Yeah.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中存在较多重复和语气词，影响流畅性和自然度。建议减少重复，避免使用“uh”等填充词，回答时直接表达观点并简洁说明原因。
예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because it helps me relax. Since I have large feet, I often look for comfortable and well-fitting shoes.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够准确。建议注意时态和语法，避免重复表达“too dangerous”，并用连词使句子更连贯。
예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but it was a bad experience because the shoes were too small. Therefore, I won't buy shoes online again since I can't try them on beforehand.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答缺乏条理，语法和表达不准确。建议先给出一般花费范围，再举例说明，避免重复和语气词，表达更清晰。
예시: The amount I spend on shoes varies depending on how much I like them. For instance, I once bought a pair for 10,000 NT dollars, but usually, I spend around 900 NT dollars.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用正确的句型表达偏好，并用连词连接条件句，使表达更自然。
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes, but I also consider the style. If the shoes are too old-fashioned, I might not choose them even if they are comfortable.
문법
× Yes, I like to purchase my shoes because, uh, buying, uh, buying shoes can help me to, uh, relax my food more frequently because of my, my food is really large, as you can see.
✓ Yes, I like to purchase my shoes because buying shoes can help me to relax my feet more frequently because my feet are really large, as you can see.
这里“buying, uh, buying shoes”重复，应该简化为“buying shoes”。另外，“food”应为“feet”，因为这里指的是脚。动名词用法正确，但要避免重复。
× Yes, I like to purchase my shoes because, uh, buying, uh, buying shoes can help me to, uh, relax my food more frequently because of my, my food is really large, as you can see.
✓ Yes, I like to purchase my shoes because buying shoes can help me to relax my feet more frequently because my feet are really large, as you can see.
“food”是“食物”，应改为“feet”（脚的复数），因为说话者指的是脚的大小。
× So, uh, I really like to buy the, the, the shoes and openly buy the shoes.
✓ So, uh, I really like to buy shoes and often buy shoes.
“the shoes”前面不需要定冠词，且“openly”用词不当，应为“often”（经常）。
× Well yes, I built a shoes online before but uh, it's quite a poor experience because it is quite too small for me.
✓ Well yes, I bought shoes online before but uh, it was quite a poor experience because they were too small for me.
“built”是“建造”的过去式，买鞋应使用“bought”。“a shoes”错误，鞋是复数或单数“a pair of shoes”。“it is”应改为“they were”，因为指鞋子，复数且过去时。
× So I will not going to will and will not going to buy any shoes in the online in the future.
✓ So I will not go and will not buy any shoes online in the future.
“will not going to”结构错误，正确用法是“will not go”或“am not going to”。“in the online”应为“online”。
× So I will not going to will and will not going to buy any shoes in the online in the future.
✓ So I will not go and will not buy any shoes online in the future.
“in the online”中“in the”不正确，正确用法是“online”，表示在线。
× It's too dangerous to not seeing the real shoes and not trying on before buying.
✓ It's too dangerous not to see the real shoes and not to try them on before buying.
“to not seeing”应改为“不定式”结构“not to see”。“trying on”前应加“to”形成不定式。
× It's too dangerous to not seeing the real shoes and not trying on before buying.
✓ It's too dangerous not to see the real shoes and not to try them on before buying.
“trying on”后缺少宾语，应加“them”指代鞋子。
× Umm, it based on how, uh, how I really like it uh, for example, I have a pair of shoes that cost me about like uh, 10,000 NT dollars, but the cheapest my shoes is about like only 900 NT dollars.
✓ Umm, it depends on how much I really like it. For example, I have a pair of shoes that cost me about 10,000 NT dollars, but my cheapest shoes cost only about 900 NT dollars.
“it based on”缺少动词，应为“it depends on”。“the cheapest my shoes is”结构错误，应为“my cheapest shoes cost”。
× So it's not really uh, steady, steady money. How much cost yeah.
✓ So I don't spend a steady amount of money. It varies.
“steady, steady money”表达不自然，应改为“a steady amount of money”。“How much cost yeah”语法错误，需重组句子。
× I would like to say that I'm much more care about how comfortable it is, but it will based on if the shoes is not too old style or something else, Yeah.
✓ I would like to say that I care much more about how comfortable it is, but it depends on whether the shoes are not too old-fashioned or something else, yeah.
“I'm much more care”中“care”应为动词原形，主语“I”后直接用“care”。“it will based on”应为“it depends on”。“the shoes is”主谓不一致，鞋子复数，应为“the shoes are”。“old style”应改为“old-fashioned”。
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