Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有語法錯誤和不自然的表達，建議你使用簡潔且正確的句子來描述不同場合穿鞋的習慣，並避免不清楚的詞彙。

예시: Yes, I like buying different types of shoes for various occasions. For example, I wear high heels for formal events, sports shoes for exercising, and new shoes when celebrating special occasions.

제안: 你的回答有重複和語法不完整的問題，建議你清楚表達優點和缺點，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times because it is very convenient. However, sometimes the shoes may not fit well or match my style, which can be a disadvantage.

제안: 你的回答中有語法錯誤和不完整的句子，建議你直接回答問題並用具體數字和原因來支持你的回答。

예시: I usually spend about 10% of my monthly budget on shoes because I like to buy new pairs that match my outfits.

제안: 你的回答表達了偏好，但句子結尾不完整且有語法錯誤，建議你用完整句子清楚說明原因並使用連接詞。

예시: I like both fashionable and comfortable shoes, but I prefer comfortable ones because if shoes are uncomfortable, it is hard to work or walk properly.

× Yes, I like to buy different type of shoes for different occasions.

✓ Yes, I like to buy different types of shoes for different occasions.

The noun 'type' should be plural 'types' because it refers to more than one kind of shoes. Also, 'of' should be followed by the plural form 'shoes' to match 'types'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× Like I will wear high heels for four more locate locations than the UMM sports shoes for exercising and I will also wear new shoes for celebrating.

✓ For example, I will wear high heels for more locations than UMM sports shoes for exercising, and I will also wear new shoes for celebrations.

The phrase 'four more locate locations' is incorrect; 'more locations' is appropriate. 'For celebrating' should be 'for celebrations' to correctly use the noun form. Also, 'Like' at the beginning is informal; 'For example' is better. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and word choice.

× But there's also some advantages of buying shoes online.

✓ But there are also some advantages of buying shoes online.

'Some advantages' is plural, so 'there's' (there is) should be 'there are' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue related to quantifiers.

× It seems it may just not fit in your size and or your styles or.

✓ It seems they may just not fit your size or your style.

The phrase 'fit in your size' is incorrect; 'fit your size' is correct. Also, 'styles' should be singular 'style' to match the context. The sentence ending with 'or' is incomplete and should be corrected. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and pronouns.

× Hmm, I'm not really sure about the specific numbers, but maybe it were accounted for 10% of my expenditure since I really like to buy a new shoes to match my outfit and I think why are you?

✓ Hmm, I'm not really sure about the specific numbers, but maybe it accounts for 10% of my expenditure since I really like to buy new shoes to match my outfit.

'It were accounted' is incorrect; the correct present tense is 'it accounts' to match the ongoing situation. 'A new shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and should not have 'a'. The phrase 'and I think why are you?' is unclear and likely an error, so it is omitted. This is a past tense and singular/plural issue.

× I like both, but if you want me to choose I would prefer comfortable shoes.

✓ I like both, but if you want me to choose, I would prefer comfortable shoes.

A comma is needed after the introductory clause 'if you want me to choose' to improve sentence clarity. This is an incorrect use of conjunctions and punctuation.

× I think it's much more important than the fashionable things that if you wear the uncomfortable shoes you will not be able to work comfortably and.

✓ I think it's much more important than fashionable things because if you wear uncomfortable shoes, you will not be able to work comfortably.

The phrase 'the fashionable things' is better as 'fashionable things' without 'the'. The sentence ending with 'and' is incomplete and should be connected properly. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and sentence structure issue.