Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific details. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "like for after. Half year." Instead, say how often you buy shoes clearly.

예시: I don't really like buying shoes because it's not very important to me. I usually buy new shoes about once every six months.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve it by adding linking words and more specific reasons. This will make your response more coherent and detailed.

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it's more convenient for me. Since I don't enjoy shopping in physical stores, online shopping saves me time and effort.

제안: Your answer is direct but could be improved by using more formal vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid contractions like "wanna" in formal speaking.

예시: I usually spend between 20 and 50 dollars on shoes because I prefer not to spend too much money on them.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, try to avoid vague phrases like "or something like that."

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because comfort is my top priority. Fashionable shoes, in my opinion, are usually worn for special occasions like parties or celebrations.

× Buying shoes is not important part for me so no I don't like buying shoes but so I I buy shoes like for after. Half year.

✓ Buying shoes is not an important part for me, so no, I don't like buying shoes, but I buy shoes about once every half year.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure issues including missing articles ('an important part'), awkward phrasing ('but so I I buy shoes like for after. Half year'), and run-on sentences. The correction adds the article 'an', clarifies the meaning, and separates ideas properly for better readability and grammatical correctness.

× I usually spend from 20 to $50 on shoes and I think I don't wanna spend more money for shoes.

✓ I usually spend from $20 to $50 on shoes, and I think I don't want to spend more money on shoes.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used with 'spend more money for shoes'; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech. Additionally, the dollar sign should precede the number consistently.