Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing which affect the naturalness and clarity. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I don't have a fixed schedule for it. Sometimes, I browse online shopping platforms, and other times, I visit malls to see the available options.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid filler words like 'umm'.

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but I find it challenging because I often worry about the size and colour not matching the pictures.

제안: Your answer is quite good with clear structure and relevant details. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence.

예시: It's difficult to specify an exact amount because it varies. For formal occasions, I tend to invest in pricier shoes to ensure they appear professional and are durable. On the other hand, for everyday casual shoes, I usually opt for cheaper options since they wear out quickly.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to use correct tenses and clearer phrasing. Also, organise your answer with linking words to compare your preferences effectively.

예시: I definitely prefer fashionable shoes because I admire fashion and like to follow trends. However, comfort is also important to me since I tend to be quite lazy, so I need shoes that are comfortable for daily wear.

× I like to buying shoes but I don't have a specific frequency to buying because if I wanna buying shoes I will brushing in the online shopping platform or I would just go into the mall and see what what kind of shoes.

✓ I like buying shoes but I don't have a specific frequency for buying because if I want to buy shoes I will browse on the online shopping platform or I would just go into the mall and see what kind of shoes there are.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'buying' not 'to buying'. The phrase 'to buying' is incorrect; it should be 'to buy' after 'want to'. 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech. 'Brushing' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'browse'. Also, 'to buying' should be 'for buying' to indicate frequency. The phrase 'what what kind of shoes' has a repetition and needs correction to 'what kind of shoes there are'. These corrections improve verb form usage and sentence clarity.

× Yes I will buy shoes online but umm I think there was no easy like buying shoes in the outline because I think but I think online product will have a lot of questions like size or the color.

✓ Yes, I buy shoes online but I think it is not easy to buy shoes online because I think online products have a lot of issues like size or colour.

The use of 'will' is inappropriate here; 'buy' is better to express habitual action. 'There was no easy like buying shoes in the outline' is incorrect; it should be 'it is not easy to buy shoes online'. 'Outline' is a mishearing or typo for 'online'. 'Online product will have' should be 'online products have' to indicate general truth. These corrections fix modal verb misuse and improve clarity.

× Yes I will buy shoes online but umm I think there was no easy like buying shoes in the outline because I think but I think online product will have a lot of questions like size or the color.

✓ Yes, I buy shoes online but I think it is not easy to buy shoes online because I think online products have a lot of questions like size or colour.

The singular 'product' should be plural 'products' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'questions' is better replaced with 'issues' or 'concerns' but as per instruction only grammar issues are corrected. This correction addresses the singular/plural mismatch.

× However, for casual shoes that I wear daily, I prefer to buy a cheap one since I get worn out.

✓ However, for casual shoes that I wear daily, I prefer to buy cheap ones since they get worn out.

'A cheap one' is singular but 'casual shoes' is plural, so 'cheap ones' is correct. Also, 'I get worn out' is incorrect; the shoes get worn out, so 'they get worn out' is appropriate. This correction fixes singular/plural agreement and pronoun reference.

× However, for casual shoes that I wear daily, I prefer to buy a cheap one since I get worn out.

✓ However, for casual shoes that I wear daily, I prefer to buy cheap ones since they get worn out.

The pronoun 'I' is incorrectly used to refer to shoes; it should be 'they' to refer to the shoes. This correction clarifies the subject of the verb 'get worn out'.

× Absolutely was the fashionable shoes because I'm with the admirer about the fashion and I was chasing it.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer fashionable shoes because I admire fashion and I am chasing it.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb at the start; 'Absolutely was the fashionable shoes' is incorrect. It should be 'Absolutely, I prefer fashionable shoes'. 'I'm with the admirer about the fashion' is incorrect; it should be 'I admire fashion'. 'I was chasing it' should be 'I am chasing it' to maintain present tense. These corrections fix sentence structure and adjective/adverb misuse.

× But the comfortable shoes was very important for me because I'm a lazy person and comfortable shoes is more important in my daily life.

✓ But comfortable shoes are very important to me because I'm a lazy person and comfortable shoes are more important in my daily life.

'The comfortable shoes was' is incorrect; 'shoes' is plural so the verb should be 'are'. Also, 'important for me' is better as 'important to me'. 'Comfortable shoes is' should be 'comfortable shoes are'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and preposition use.