Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, try to give specific details about your shoe buying habits.

예시: Yes, I like buying shoes because they complete my outfit. I usually buy new shoes every two or three months, and I prefer different brands to match various styles.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some hesitation and repetition. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. Also, avoid filler words like 'umm' and repeated words.

예시: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on to ensure the size fits and the style matches my preferences. Online pictures often don't show the real product accurately.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing phrases. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid unnecessary words. Use specific numbers and explain the difference between branded and daily use shoes.

예시: If I buy branded shoes, I usually spend around 10,000 taka per pair. For daily use shoes, I spend about 3,000 to 4,000 taka.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding filler words and making sentences more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a clear reason for your preference.

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is very important to me. If my shoes hurt my toes, then wearing them is pointless. Therefore, I always choose shoes that feel good when I walk or do activities.

× I wear shoes just the brands and different things.

✓ I wear shoes from different brands and various styles.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'just the brands and different things' which is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies that the student wears shoes from different brands and styles, properly using plural forms and prepositions.

× And often I do buy shoes within like two or three months of every purchase I buy buy a new shoe.

✓ And often I buy shoes every two or three months; after every purchase, I buy a new pair of shoes.

The original sentence has plural and singular inconsistencies and repetition ('buy buy'). The correction uses 'a new pair of shoes' to correctly express singular purchase of plural items and removes repetition.

× Umm no I didn't buy shoes online ever because whenever I need to buy a shoe I need to carefully choose the size and match my preferences.

✓ Umm no, I have never bought shoes online because whenever I need to buy shoes, I need to carefully choose the size and match my preferences.

The original sentence uses simple past 'didn't buy' with 'ever' which is better expressed with present perfect 'have never bought' to indicate experience up to now. Also, 'a shoe' changed to 'shoes' for general meaning.

× Whereas in online the the the products don't seem like what they're in real life so it's different.

✓ Whereas online, the products don't seem like they are in real life, so it's different.

The phrase 'in online' is incorrect; 'online' does not require a preposition. Also, the sentence is cleaned up for clarity and grammar.

× Money to be specific, if I buy a branded shoe I spend around 10,000 on per shoe.

✓ To be specific about money, if I buy a branded shoe, I spend around 10,000 per shoe.

The phrase 'Money to be specific' is awkward; 'To be specific about money' is clearer. Also, 'on per shoe' is incorrect; 'per shoe' suffices.

× I'm gonna go I want to buy a roof for a refusal daily usage shoe I spend around 3 to 4000 tacos.

✓ If I want to buy a rough, daily-use shoe, I spend around 3,000 to 4,000 taka.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Roof for a refusal daily usage shoe' is likely a mishearing or typo. Corrected to 'rough, daily-use shoe' and 'tacos' corrected to 'taka' (currency). Also, numbers formatted properly.

× If I walk around feeling my toes hurt then was what's the point in wearing shoes.

✓ If I walk around feeling my toes hurt, then what's the point in wearing shoes?

The original sentence has 'then was what's the point' which is incorrect. Corrected to 'then what's the point' for proper sentence structure and meaning.

× I like to have my comfort while walking or doing any stuff so comfort in shoes matter the most to me.

✓ I like to be comfortable while walking or doing any activities, so comfort in shoes matters the most to me.

'Doing any stuff' is informal and vague; 'doing any activities' is clearer. Also, 'comfort in shoes matter' should be 'comfort in shoes matters' to agree with singular subject 'comfort'.