Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, of course. I like buying shoes, so I think no one would reject having a nice pair of new shoes for themselves. I think I buy new shoes once every six months.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yes, of course. In fact, I bought most of my shoes online because in recent years the online platforms are very developed and you normally get a better price in online platforms. So even though I've tried the shoes in stores, I would prefer to buy them online to make better comparisons.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Well, my maximum budget for a pair of shoes is CN¥1000. Normally my shoes are within the range from 300 to CN¥600 and I value the quality and the comfort of the shoes.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
While comfort is definitely my first priority because I like to do sport and I walk a lot, so I would prefer to wear comfortable shoes. But I think nowadays many comfortable shoes are also very stylish, so I tend to choose something that meets both the qualities.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 85.0제안: 你的回答自然且内容丰富，但有些句子稍显冗长。建议在回答时更直接，避免重复表达相同意思，同时保持句子简洁。
예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase a new pair every six months.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 90.0제안: 回答内容具体且连贯，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时避免重复使用“online platforms”。
예시: Yes, I have bought most of my shoes online because online platforms have developed rapidly, offering better prices. Although I try shoes in stores, I prefer buying online to compare options more easily.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 88.0제안: 回答清晰且具体，但可以通过增加连接词使句子更连贯，同时稍微丰富词汇表达。
예시: My maximum budget for a pair of shoes is CN¥1000; however, I usually spend between CN¥300 and CN¥600 because I prioritize quality and comfort.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 87.0제안: 回答内容完整，但句子结构稍显复杂。建议使用更简洁的句子，并合理使用连接词以增强逻辑性。
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes since I do sports and walk a lot. However, many comfortable shoes are also stylish nowadays, so I choose ones that combine both comfort and fashion.
문법
× you normally get a better price in online platforms
✓ you normally get a better price on online platforms
The correct preposition to use with 'platforms' in this context is 'on' rather than 'in'. We say 'on a platform' when referring to websites or online services. Using 'in' is incorrect here.
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