Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

예시: Yes, I like buying shoes occasionally. It depends on my needs; for example, I buy new shoes when my old ones are worn out. Comfortable shoes are important to me because I use them for running and exercising at the gym.

제안: Your answer should be more organized and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and improve vocabulary usage.

예시: Yes, I recently bought shoes online from the TAMU website, which is very popular in my country. The shoes I ordered look great and are very comfortable. They provide good support during exercise, so I feel happy wearing them.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Provide a direct response with specific details and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: I usually spend between 3,000 and 5,000 on shoes, depending on my budget. Recently, I bought a pair for under 5,000. Currently, I am not very interested in buying more shoes.

제안: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to explain your preferences with specific examples. Avoid vague or incomplete sentences.

예시: It depends on the situation. For example, when I go to a party, I prefer fashionable shoes because everyone wears them and they look nice. However, when I go to the playground, I choose comfortable shoes since I do a lot of physical activities there.

× Yeah, sometimes I want to buying shoes.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I want to buy shoes.

The verb 'want to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. 'Want to buying' is incorrect; it should be 'want to buy'. Use the base verb after 'want to'.

× I want to buy shoes when I need it help us to film a comfortable.

✓ I want to buy shoes when I need them to help me feel comfortable.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect here because it does not agree with the plural noun 'shoes'. Also, 'help us to film a comfortable' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'help me feel comfortable' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I was wear it when I was go to gym.

✓ I wore them when I went to the gym.

The verb tense is incorrect ('was wear' should be 'wore'), and the pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'shoes'. Also, 'was go' is incorrect; the past tense 'went' should be used. Additionally, 'the gym' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Is it is the shows that I order it's look.

✓ These are the shoes that I ordered; they look nice.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It lacks proper sentence structure and verb agreement. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning with proper subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

× It is very comfortable and always support me during exercise.

✓ They are very comfortable and always support me during exercise.

The pronoun 'It' is singular but refers to 'shoes', which is plural. Therefore, 'They' should be used. Also, 'support' agrees with plural subject 'They'.

× I feel happy when I wear this.

✓ I feel happy when I wear them.

'This' is singular, but 'shoes' is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'them'.

× I usually spend about 3 to 5000 on shoes.

✓ I usually spend about 3,000 to 5,000 on shoes.

The numbers need to be clearly expressed with proper commas and units. '3 to 5000' is unclear; it should be '3,000 to 5,000'.

× It depend upon my budget but recently I bought a pair of shoes under 5000.

✓ It depends upon my budget, but recently I bought a pair of shoes under 5,000.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with singular subject 'It'. Also, numbers should be formatted properly with commas.

× The I I am not interesting more to buying shoes but.

✓ Then, I am not interested in buying more shoes.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'The I I' is incorrect, and 'interesting' should be 'interested'. Also, 'to buying' should be 'in buying'. The corrected sentence uses proper structure and word forms.

× It depend upon the situation.

✓ It depends upon the situation.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with singular subject 'It'.

× Same time when I was ready for going to party I prefer fashionable shoes because all people there wear fashionable shoes and I think it's look like well in party

✓ Sometimes when I am ready to go to a party, I prefer fashionable shoes because all the people there wear fashionable shoes and I think they look good at parties.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'Was ready for going' should be 'am ready to go'. 'Prefer' is present tense and fits here. 'It's look like well' is incorrect; it should be 'they look good'. Also, 'party' should be plural or preceded by an article. The corrected sentence uses consistent tense and proper expressions.

× and when I go make when I ready for go to playground I wear comfortable shoes because I do many.

✓ and when I am ready to go to the playground, I wear comfortable shoes because I do a lot of activities.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Go make when I ready for go' is incorrect; it should be 'am ready to go'. 'Playground' needs the definite article 'the'. 'I do many' is incomplete; it should be 'I do a lot of activities'. The corrected sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.