Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
I like buying shoes but not that often because I usually buy choose only some special occasions like graduation ceremony or birth. My birthday. The last birthday my dad gave me. Doctor Martin's brand.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
I haven't buy juice online before because I prefer to buying at physical job and try on many shoes because you have you never know which you will suit to you at least you try it.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Normally I usually spend on choose about 2000 to 6000 but not more than 100 one 10,000 because it's so expensive then I can afford. So I think the average price is as I said before.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I prefer fashionable shoes, but I usually combine fashion with comfort because if you forget only its appearance you will find that you not wear it frequently and is kind of waste your money for no reason.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 55.0제안: คำตอบของคุณควรมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยตอบตรงคำถามและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำหรือขาดความเชื่อมโยงระหว่างประโยค ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงกันอย่างมีเหตุผล
예시: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't do it very often. Usually, I buy shoes only for special occasions like graduations or birthdays. For example, last birthday, my dad gave me a pair of Dr. Martens shoes.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 50.0제안: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม รวมถึงเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหลและชัดเจน เช่น การใช้ linking words เพื่ออธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน
예시: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to shop in physical stores. This way, I can try on many shoes to see which ones suit me best before buying.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 45.0제안: ควรตอบคำถามอย่างชัดเจนและใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม รวมถึงจัดระเบียบประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และมีความเชื่อมโยง เพื่อให้คำตอบดูเป็นธรรมชาติและเข้าใจง่าย
예시: I usually spend between 2,000 and 6,000 baht on shoes, but I never spend more than 10,000 baht because that would be too expensive for me. So, my average spending is around 4,000 baht.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 60.0제안: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงความคิดอย่างมีเหตุผล รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลีกเลี่ยงความซ้ำซ้อน เพื่อให้คำตอบดูเป็นธรรมชาติและน่าสนใจ
예시: I prefer fashionable shoes, but I always try to find a balance between style and comfort. If shoes look good but are uncomfortable, I probably won't wear them often, which would be a waste of money.
문법
× I like buying shoes but not that often because I usually buy choose only some special occasions like graduation ceremony or birth.
✓ I like buying shoes but not that often because I usually buy shoes only on special occasions like graduation ceremonies or birthdays.
The sentence has singular and plural issues. 'buy choose' is incorrect and should be 'buy shoes'. 'graduation ceremony' and 'birth' should be pluralized to 'graduation ceremonies' and 'birthdays' to match the context of multiple occasions.
× My birthday.
✓ For example, my birthday.
The sentence fragment 'My birthday.' lacks a verb and is incomplete. Adding 'For example,' makes it a complete sentence and clarifies the meaning.
× The last birthday my dad gave me.
✓ On my last birthday, my dad gave me shoes from Doctor Martin's brand.
The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'On my last birthday' and completing the sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.
× I haven't buy juice online before because I prefer to buying at physical job and try on many shoes because you have you never know which you will suit to you at least you try it.
✓ I haven't bought shoes online before because I prefer buying at physical stores and trying on many shoes since you never know which will suit you unless you try them.
Incorrect verb form 'buy' should be 'bought' (past participle). 'prefer to buying' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer buying'. 'physical job' is incorrect; it should be 'physical stores'. The phrase 'you have you never know' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'you never know'. 'which you will suit to you' is incorrect; it should be 'which will suit you'. 'at least you try it' is better expressed as 'unless you try them'.
× Normally I usually spend on choose about 2000 to 6000 but not more than 100 one 10,000 because it's so expensive then I can afford.
✓ Normally, I usually spend about 2000 to 6000 but not more than 10,000 because it's so expensive that I cannot afford more.
The phrase 'spend on choose' is incorrect and should be 'spend about'. '100 one 10,000' is unclear and corrected to '10,000'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.
× So I think the average price is as I said before.
✓ So I think the average price is as I said before.
This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.
× I prefer fashionable shoes, but I usually combine fashion with comfort because if you forget only its appearance you will find that you not wear it frequently and is kind of waste your money for no reason.
✓ I prefer fashionable shoes, but I usually combine fashion with comfort because if you focus only on appearance, you will find that you do not wear them frequently and it is kind of a waste of your money.
The phrase 'if you forget only its appearance' is incorrect; it should be 'if you focus only on appearance'. 'you not wear it frequently' should be 'you do not wear them frequently'. 'is kind of waste your money' should be 'it is kind of a waste of your money'. The sentence is corrected for conjunction use and clarity.
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