Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如重复使用“I”，以及“used to be a fashion style”表达不准确。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I used to enjoy buying shoes when I was in high school because it was a popular fashion trend. In my twenties, I bought shoes about once a month. However, now I don't buy shoes often because they are expensive and I prefer to save money.

제안: 回答中时态和语法使用不准确，如“have ever bought”应为“have bought”，以及“feel it really not fit”表达不自然。建议注意时态一致性，并使用更准确的表达。

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but it was not a good experience. About three years ago, I purchased a pair of football shoes, but after wearing them for two matches, I realized they didn't fit well. Unfortunately, I couldn't return them.

제안: 回答中数字表达混乱且不连贯，且有语法错误。建议明确表达花费金额，避免重复和语法错误，使用连贯的句子。

예시: I used to spend a lot of money on shoes, about $3000 per month. However, now I prefer comfortable shoes and spend less, around $3000 per year.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，如“to show your to show your money”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化表达，避免重复，并注意冠词使用。

예시: In the past, I preferred fashionable shoes because they were a way to show my status. But now, I prefer comfortable shoes since I have to walk long distances at university every day.

× I I used to like buying shoes when I was in Senior High School because it was used to be a fashion style.

✓ I used to like buying shoes when I was in Senior High School because it used to be a fashion style.

句中“it was used to be”结构错误，应为“it used to be”，表示过去常常是某种状态。多余的“I”也应删除。

× In 20 twenties I used to buy shoes for about once a month.

✓ In the 20s, I used to buy shoes about once a month.

“20 twenties”表达不正确，正确应为“the 20s”表示20世纪20年代；“for about once a month”中“for”多余，应去掉。

× But now I don't like buying shoes because I think it cost too much and it's not a kind of way to.

✓ But now I don't like buying shoes because I think it costs too much and it's not the kind of thing to do.

“cost”应为第三人称单数“costs”，因为主语是“it”；“not a kind of way to”表达不完整且不正确，应改为“not the kind of thing to do”。

× Yes, I have ever bought shows online but it was not a very good experience.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online but it was not a very good experience.

“have ever bought”用法不当，正确用法是“have bought”；“shows”应为“shoes”。

× After I wear it for about two football matches, I feel it really not fit my foot, but I can't give it back.

✓ After I wore it for about two football matches, I felt it really did not fit my foot, but I couldn't give it back.

时态应统一为过去时，“wear”改为“wore”，“feel”改为“felt”；“not fit”应改为“did not fit”；“can't”改为“couldn't”以符合过去时。

× I used to spend a lot of money on shoes, uh, it cost about $3000 per month.

✓ I used to spend a lot of money on shoes; it cost about $3000 per month.

两个独立句子应用分号或句号分开，且“cost”作为过去时态正确。

× But now I just want to buy some comfortable shoes, so I cost, uh, less than before.

✓ But now I just want to buy some comfortable shoes, so I spend less than before.

“cost”用法不当，表示花费应使用“spend”。

× I use for about $3000 per year.

✓ I spend about $3000 per year.

“use for”用法错误，应改为“spend”。

× In the past I prefer fashionable shoes because it's a kind of way to shoe to show your to show your money.

✓ In the past I preferred fashionable shoes because it was a way to show your money.

时态应为过去时，“prefer”改为“preferred”，“it's”改为“it was”；“a kind of way to shoe to show your to show your money”表达重复且错误，应简化为“a way to show your money”。

× But now I prefer comfortable shoes because in university I have to work for a long distance every day, so I need a comfortable shoes.

✓ But now I prefer comfortable shoes because in university I have to travel a long distance every day, so I need comfortable shoes.

“work for a long distance”表达不当，应改为“travel a long distance”；“a comfortable shoes”中“a”与复数“shoes”不匹配，应去掉“a”。