Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, of course I'm obsessed with new shoes, especially high heeled shoes. They are so beautiful and elegant. Almost every week I went to a big shopping malls to try some new shoes and if they are suitable for me I will buy them.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yes I have, but it's a terrible experience. At that time when I received that pair of shoes, I tried it. However it totally different from what I had expected and it was so uncomfortable.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Well, it depends, different condition. If I buy a pair of high heeled shoes, it usually costs me CN¥1000 uh. However, if I buy a pair of trainer uh, I maybe spend CN¥500.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
Wow. While it's difficult to make a decision for me because I love the fashionable shoes and I think they are beautiful and elegant and they are suitable for my style. However, when I do some exercise, I prefer comfortable shoes to keep fit.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答时时态不一致，应该保持时态统一；表达稍显重复，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: Yes, I am obsessed with new shoes, especially high-heeled ones because they look beautiful and elegant. Almost every week, I go to large shopping malls to try on new shoes, and if they fit well, I buy them.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答中缺少连接词，导致句子衔接不够自然；建议使用连接词并丰富细节描述。
예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but it was a terrible experience because when I received the pair, I tried them on and found they were completely different from what I expected and very uncomfortable.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中表达不够连贯，语法和词汇使用不准确；建议使用完整句子并用连接词使表达更自然。
예시: Well, it depends on the type of shoes. For example, if I buy a pair of high-heeled shoes, they usually cost me around CN¥1000. However, if I buy trainers, I might spend about CN¥500.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 78.0제안: 回答中句子结构较复杂且有些重复，建议简化表达并使用更自然的连接词。
예시: It's hard to choose because I love fashionable shoes since they are beautiful and match my style. However, when I exercise, I prefer comfortable shoes to stay fit.
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