Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子结构简单且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子直接回答问题，并用连接词使回答更自然流畅。

예시: I used to love buying shoes when I was in junior high school, but now I am less interested. However, I usually buy new shoes during the Spring Festival to celebrate the new year.

제안: 时态使用不准确，句子结构不够自然。建议使用正确时态并丰富细节，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually buy shoes online because I find it more convenient than going to the street market. Moreover, online shopping saves me a lot of time and effort.

제안: 回答不完整且有语法错误，缺少连贯性。建议直接回答问题并用完整句子说明原因，避免语法错误。

예시: I usually spend about 5000 yuans on shoes every year because I like to have different styles for various occasions.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少逻辑连接。建议用完整句子表达偏好，并用连接词说明不同场合的选择。

예시: I prefer fashionable shoes because they help me express my personality and match my colorful clothes. However, when I do sports, I usually wear comfortable shoes for better support.

× When I was in junior high school.

✓ I liked buying shoes when I was in junior high school.

原句缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构不完整。应补充完整的句子，使表达清晰。

× maybe I buy a shoes during the Spring festival to celebrate the new year.

✓ maybe I buy shoes during the Spring Festival to celebrate the new year.

“shoes”是复数名词，前面不应加不定冠词“a”。

× I usually bought shoes online because I'm too lazy to go to the street market to pick one.

✓ I usually buy shoes online because I'm too lazy to go to the street market to pick one.

“usually”表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时而非过去时。

× I think buy shoes online is more convenient.

✓ I think buying shoes online is more convenient.

动词“think”后接动名词短语作主语时，应使用动名词形式“buying”。

× I think I spend 5000 yuans on shoes every year because.

✓ I think I spend 5000 yuans on shoes every year because I love different kinds of shoes.

句子以“because”结尾，缺少原因部分，导致句子不完整。应补充完整。

× Oh, I boast them too.

✓ Oh, I have them too.

“boast”用法错误，表达拥有应使用“have”。

× But if I go sports, I usually wear.

✓ But if I do sports, I usually wear comfortable shoes.

“go sports”表达错误，应为“do sports”；句子缺少宾语，需补充完整。