Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Of course, I think most males like buy sneakers. I usually buy a pair every few months.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yes, I have because it's clearly that's what promotion they have on their website.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Uh, it's depends. Usually it's from $200 to $400.00, but I could increase my budget if I really like it.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
In my opinion, I will choose fashionable shoes because if I want to choose comfortable shoes, I think there's no shoes more comfortable than a slipper.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a more natural and complete response with linking words to connect ideas.
예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially sneakers. I usually purchase a new pair every few months because I like to keep up with the latest styles.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 50.0제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to directly answer the question and explain your reason clearly using proper sentence structure and linking words.
예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online because the website often offers attractive promotions and discounts, which makes it convenient and affordable.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is understandable but has minor grammatical errors and could be more fluent. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use linking words to make your answer smoother.
예시: It depends, but I usually spend between $200 and $400 on shoes. However, I am willing to spend more if I find a pair that I really like.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer shows your opinion but the explanation is a bit confusing and could be clearer. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a more precise explanation.
예시: I prefer fashionable shoes because they help me express my style. Although comfortable shoes are important, I think slippers are the most comfortable, so I choose fashion over comfort for regular shoes.
문법
× I think most males like buy sneakers.
✓ I think most males like buying sneakers.
The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing general preferences. Therefore, 'like buy' should be corrected to 'like buying' to be grammatically correct.
× Yes, I have because it's clearly that's what promotion they have on their website.
✓ Yes, I have because it's clearly the promotion they have on their website.
The phrase 'it's clearly that's what promotion' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'it's clearly the promotion' to properly use the definite article and avoid awkward phrasing.
× Uh, it's depends.
✓ Uh, it depends.
The phrase 'it's depends' is incorrect because 'depends' is a verb and should not be preceded by 'is'. The correct form is 'it depends' without 'is'.
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