Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, I really enjoy shopping overall, but shoes are my main area of interest. I bought a pair of shoes last month and I'm still looking for a new one because I think it's really important for us to have shoes with every outfit and these make our lives much more comfortable.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Well, over the past few years I have become very comfortable with the idea of online shopping. However, I believe that buying shoes is better when you go to a shop because that way you can see if the shoes are comfortable and just them accordingly.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I actually do not have a certain budget for shoes. It I it really depends on uh, whether I like the shoes and if they're comfortable enough. If all these requirements are met, I can spend from around 4K to 20K on the shoes.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
Well, I prefer shoes that have both these qualities. However, if I have to choose from any one of them, I would go for comfortable ones because in my profession there's no room for style but for the comfort.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is generally good but a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.
예시: Yes, I like buying shoes quite often. For example, I bought a pair last month because I believe shoes complement every outfit and provide comfort throughout the day.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about why buying shoes in shops is better.
예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. However, I prefer buying them in shops because I can try them on to check comfort and fit, which is important for me.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer has some hesitation and minor errors. Try to speak more fluently and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'.
예시: I don't have a fixed budget for shoes. It depends on whether I like the design and find them comfortable. Usually, I spend between 4,000 to 20,000 rupees on a good pair.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 80.0제안: Good answer with clear preference and reasoning. To improve, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a bit more detail about your profession to enrich the answer.
예시: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable. However, if I must choose, I prioritize comfort because in my profession, which involves long hours of standing, comfort is essential.
문법
× However, I believe that buying shoes is better when you go to a shop because that way you can see if the shoes are comfortable and just them accordingly.
✓ However, I believe that buying shoes is better when you go to a shop because that way you can see if the shoes are comfortable and adjust them accordingly.
The word 'just' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'adjust' which means to change something slightly to improve it. Using 'just' is a mistake in verb usage and does not fit the context. The sentence requires a verb in the base form to indicate the action of modifying the shoes for comfort.
× It I it really depends on uh, whether I like the shoes and if they're comfortable enough.
✓ It really depends on whether I like the shoes and if they're comfortable enough.
The phrase 'It I it' is a typographical or speech error causing sentence structure problems. Removing the extra words clarifies the sentence and makes it grammatically correct. The sentence should have a clear subject and verb without unnecessary repetition.
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