Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复词汇，且句子结构较为混乱，建议简化表达，避免重复，并且直接回答问题。

예시: No, I don't like buying shoes often because I think it's unnecessary to buy new ones frequently. Therefore, I don't have a regular schedule for purchasing shoes.

제안: 回答表达基本清晰，但语法错误较多，建议注意主谓一致和冠词使用，同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: No, I haven't bought shoes online because there are only pictures, and I think it's necessary to make sure the shoes fit my feet before buying.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，句子不够流畅，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: I usually spend about CN¥300 to CN¥400 on shoes because I think it's unnecessary to spend too much. Also, a pair of gym shoes can suit most occasions, so I don't spend a lot.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议理清逻辑，使用正确的连接词，并注意词汇的准确使用。

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes for two main reasons. First, like clothes, comfort is more important than appearance. Second, fashionable shoes are too expensive and not worth the cost for me.

× No, I don't like buying shoe shoes and it's hard for me to remember how often I buy them because I think it's unnecessary to buy buy new shoes very often so I don't have a regular time for purchasing shoes.

✓ No, I don't like buying shoes and it's hard for me to remember how often I buy them because I think it's unnecessary to buy new shoes very often so I don't have a regular time for purchasing shoes.

这里'shoe shoes'重复且'shoe'应为复数形式'shoes'，因为指的是鞋子这个类别。英语中名词复数形式用于表示多个物品。

× No, I haven't bought shoes yet online because there's only picture in online shopping and in my opinion it is necessary to make sure if the shoes is fit my feet.

✓ No, I haven't bought shoes online yet because there is only a picture in online shopping and in my opinion it is necessary to make sure if the shoes fit my feet.

'there's only picture'中'picture'应为单数且前面需加不定冠词'a'，表示“只有一张图片”。此外，'the shoes is'应改为'the shoes fit'，因为'shoes'是复数，动词应与复数主语一致。

× About CN¥300 to CN¥400 in average because in my opinion it's unnecessary to for me to cost too much on shoes. What's more, a pair of gym shoes can fit most situations, therefore I spend I don't spend much money on.

✓ About CN¥300 to CN¥400 on average because in my opinion it's unnecessary for me to spend too much on shoes. What's more, a pair of gym shoes can fit most situations, therefore I don't spend much money on them.

'in average'应为'on average'，表示“平均”。'to for me to cost'结构错误，应为'for me to spend'，'cost'用法不当。最后一句中缺少宾语，应补充'them'指代鞋子。

× I prefer comfortable shoes and mainly by two reasons.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes mainly for two reasons.

'and mainly by two reasons'结构不正确，正确表达应为'mainly for two reasons'，表示“主要有两个原因”。

× The first one is just like clothes and pants. The most important part of shoes is filling then appearance.

✓ The first one is just like clothes and pants. The most important part of shoes is feeling rather than appearance.

'filling'应为'feeling'，表示“舒适感”，而不是“填充物”。此外，'then'应为'rather than'，表示“而不是”。

× What's more, fashionable shoes are too expensive for me and in my opinion is not what it would not worth me to cost much.

✓ What's more, fashionable shoes are too expensive for me and in my opinion it is not worth spending much on them.

句子结构混乱，'is not what it would not worth me to cost much'不符合英语表达，应改为'it is not worth spending much on them'，表达“我认为不值得花太多钱”。