Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cevaplarınızı daha açık ve net yaparak, gereksiz tekrar ve duraklamalardan kaçının. Örneğin, alışkanlıklarınızı belirtirken daha spesifik olun ve cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve anlaşılır yapın.

예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. Usually, I buy a new pair once a year, but last month I bought a sneaker because I needed a comfortable pair for daily use.

제안: Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla destekleyin. Ayrıca, deneyiminizi daha detaylı ve spesifik şekilde açıklayın. Gereksiz duraklamalardan kaçının ve cümle yapınızı geliştirin.

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online from the Dollop app. The pair I ordered was from Germany, but unfortunately, they didn't fit my feet properly, so I had to return them.

제안: Cevabınızı daha net ve anlaşılır yapmalısınız. Fiyat ve tercihleriniz hakkında açık bilgi verin ve gereksiz tekrar ve duraklamalardan kaçının. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha düzgün ve akıcı kurmaya çalışın.

예시: The last time I bought shoes, I spent about 4000 Syrian pounds. However, the amount I spend usually depends on the type of shoes, like sneakers or boots.

제안: Cevabınızı daha açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde ifade edin. Tercihinizi net belirtin ve nedenlerini açıklayın. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve doğal yapmaya özen gösterin.

예시: I prefer fashionable shoes because I like to look stylish. However, comfort is also important to me, so I usually choose shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable.

× Uh, it changed, but I bought a sneaker last month.

✓ Uh, it has changed, but I bought a sneaker last month.

The sentence mixes past simple and present perfect tenses incorrectly. 'It changed' should be 'it has changed' to indicate a change that has relevance to the present moment.

× Generally I bought sneaker umm, for once for the year and sometimes some years.

✓ Generally, I buy sneakers once a year, and sometimes every few years.

The noun 'sneaker' should be plural 'sneakers' when referring to shoes in general. Also, the phrase 'for once for the year' is incorrect; it should be 'once a year' to express frequency.

× Yes, I bought shoes online from Dollop application and this pair, uh, isn't from Turkey, it's from Germany.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes online from the Dollop application, and this pair isn't from Turkey; it's from Germany.

The sentence is mostly correct, but 'Dollop application' needs the definite article 'the' before it. This is an article error (ID 22), but since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, this is acceptable here.

× And I realize, uh, the shoes come it doesn't fit my foot.

✓ And I realized that the shoes didn't fit my foot when they arrived.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. It lacks proper sentence structure and verb tense consistency. 'I realize' should be past tense 'I realized' to match the past event, and the phrase 'the shoes come it doesn't fit' is incorrect and needs to be rephrased.

× Last time I buy the shoes I spent 4000 serious.

✓ Last time I bought shoes, I spent 4000 liras.

The verb 'buy' should be in past tense 'bought' to match the past time reference 'last time'. Also, 'serious' is likely a mispronunciation or misspelling of the currency 'liras' or 'serious' is incorrect here.

× Uh, but it depends uh the S If it is a sneaker or boots, umm, I'm not telling the umm right?

✓ Uh, but it depends on whether it is sneakers or boots. Umm, I'm not sure, right?

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Depends the S If' is incorrect; it should be 'depends on whether'. Also, 'sneaker or boots' should be pluralized consistently as 'sneakers or boots'. The last part 'I'm not telling the umm right?' is unclear and corrected to 'I'm not sure, right?' for clarity.

× Yes, I prefer fashionable shoes, but uh, it's also can be a comfort comfortable 'cause if it is just a fashionable, I can wear umm, seemingly.

✓ Yes, I prefer fashionable shoes, but they can also be comfortable because if they are just fashionable, I can only wear them occasionally.

The phrase 'it's also can be a comfort comfortable' is incorrect modal verb usage and adjective form. 'It's also can be' should be 'they can also be', and 'comfort comfortable' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'if it is just a fashionable' is incomplete; it should be 'if they are just fashionable'. The word 'seemingly' is misused and replaced with 'occasionally' to convey the intended meaning.