Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, I love to buy shoes. Recently I purchase Jordan shoes which is nearby 2,00,000 due to my financial condition is good, so I buy Jordans and I often buy Jordans every two weeks.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yes I have bought shoes online as one day I was seeing a movie and advertisement pop up and the advertisement is of Jordan shoes and I preferably buy online Jordan shoes.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I usually spend 50 to ₹1,00,000 every six month on my shoes. I have a large collection of Jordan shoes as well as Nike shoes. I love the company and the brands of Jordan, whereas I love to wear.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I prefer both fashionable shoes as well as comfortable shoes, whereas I prefer comfortable shoes in in a place where I go without any fashion show, whereas.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 55.0제안: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Also, clarify the price and frequency more naturally.
예시: Yes, I love buying shoes, especially Jordans. Recently, I purchased a pair that cost around 200,000 rupees because my financial condition is good. I usually buy Jordans every two weeks as I am a big fan of the brand.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 60.0제안: Try to make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer sentence structure. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'preferably buy online Jordan shoes'. Keep your answer natural and concise.
예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online. One day, while watching a movie, an advertisement for Jordan shoes popped up, which encouraged me to purchase them online. Since then, I prefer buying Jordan shoes through online stores.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 50.0제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Be specific and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, clarify the amount you spend and explain your preference clearly.
예시: I usually spend between 50,000 to 100,000 rupees every six months on shoes. I have a large collection of Jordan and Nike shoes because I really like their quality and designs.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 45.0제안: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to explain your preference logically and keep your answer concise.
예시: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. However, when I am not attending any fashion events, I usually choose comfortable shoes to ensure I can walk easily.
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