Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并直接回答问题，同时避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I usually buy them only twice a year because I don't need new ones often.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，句子中断，建议完整表达观点并使用连贯的句子结构。

예시: Yes, I used to buy shoes online a few years ago, but I stopped because the shoes were often uncomfortable.

제안: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰，建议使用简单明了的句子直接说明花费金额和原因。

예시: I usually spend about 100 Chinese yuan on shoes because I can't afford expensive ones.

제안: 回答表达不够流畅，有语法错误和重复，建议简洁明了地表达偏好并给出具体理由。

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because they help me stay focused and feel good in any situation.

× Well, I definitely like buying shoes almost half a year.

✓ Well, I have definitely liked buying shoes for almost half a year.

这里描述的是从过去持续到现在的动作，应该使用现在完成时态，而不是一般现在时。

× Yeah, because I if the shoes are not broken, so I will not buy them normally I will spend half a year.

✓ Yeah, if the shoes are not broken, I will not buy them. Normally, I will wait half a year.

句子结构混乱，存在多余的连词和不完整的句子，应拆分为两个完整句子，去掉多余的连词，使表达清晰。

× Yeah, quite a few years ago I like buying shoes from the online jobs, but now I have changed this habit because the shoes I bought from the online shop normally are not comfortable, so I.

✓ Yeah, quite a few years ago I liked buying shoes from online shops, but now I have changed this habit because the shoes I bought from online shops are normally not comfortable.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时，like应改为liked；online jobs应改为online shops；句子末尾不完整，应补充完整。

× Yeah, quite a few years ago I like buying shoes from the online jobs, but now I have changed this habit because the shoes I bought from the online shop normally are not comfortable, so I.

✓ Yeah, quite a few years ago I liked buying shoes from online shops, but now I have changed this habit because the shoes I bought from online shops are normally not comfortable.

介词使用错误，应该用from online shops而不是from the online jobs。

× While anomalies by 1 CN¥100 on the shoes because I think I can't afford the expensive shoes so I just spend the proper money with that.

✓ I usually spend about CN¥100 on shoes because I think I can't afford expensive shoes, so I just spend an appropriate amount of money.

量词使用错误，'while anomalies by 1 CN¥100'不合适，应使用'usually spend about CN¥100'，'proper money'应改为'an appropriate amount of money'。

× While anomalies by 1 CN¥100 on the shoes because I think I can't afford the expensive shoes so I just spend the proper money with that.

✓ I usually spend about CN¥100 on shoes because I think I can't afford expensive shoes, so I just spend an appropriate amount of money on them.

介词使用错误，'spend the proper money with that'应改为'spend an appropriate amount of money on them'。

× Well, I will definitely choose the comfortable shoes because in every occasions, I think the best comfortable shoes you make, uh, keep the perfect situation and I can focus.

✓ Well, I will definitely choose comfortable shoes because on every occasion, I think the most comfortable shoes help me keep the perfect condition and focus.

单复数错误，'in every occasions'应为'on every occasion'，'the best comfortable shoes you make'表达不清，应改为'the most comfortable shoes help me'。