Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，例如“fine tooth”应为“buying shoes”，时态混乱，且表达不够自然。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意时态一致，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, I like buying shoes, but not very often. I usually buy new ones only when my old shoes are worn out or uncomfortable. I believe it's important to have good quality shoes for daily use.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“both shoes online”应为“bought shoes online”，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，并用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online twice. However, I don't think it's a good idea because sometimes the shoes don't fit well or feel uncomfortable. This is a problem since people can't try them before buying.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，如“PE pair”和“$2008”可能是错误表达，句子未完成。建议使用准确的词汇，完整表达观点，并避免数字错误。

예시: Honestly, I don't usually spend a lot of money on shoes because I only buy new pairs two or three times a year. I prefer comfortable and durable shoes, so I usually spend around $200 each time.

제안: 回答较好，但有小的语法错误，如“when I doing sports”应为“when I am doing sports”。建议注意动词形式，保持句子完整和准确。

예시: I would say it depends on the situation. For example, if I'm going to a party, I prefer fashionable shoes because they look stylish and make me feel confident. However, when I am doing sports or exercising, I always choose comfortable shoes to protect my feet.

× I like fine tooth but not occasionally.

✓ I like fine tooth but not often.

句中使用了“not occasionally”，表达不自然，应该用“not often”来表示“不经常”。这是现在时态中频率副词的正确用法。

× Usually I bought a new spare when my old shoes are worn out or uncomfortable.

✓ Usually I buy a new pair when my old shoes are worn out or uncomfortable.

句子描述的是习惯动作，应该使用一般现在时“buy”，而不是过去时“bought”。

× Usually I bought a new spare when my old shoes are worn out or uncomfortable.

✓ Usually I buy a new pair when my old shoes are worn out or uncomfortable.

“a new spare”用词不当，应该用“a new pair”表示“一双新鞋”，符合单复数搭配规则。

× Usually I bought a new spare when my old shoes are worn out or uncomfortable.

✓ Usually I buy a new pair when my old shoes are worn out or uncomfortable.

“are worn out”是现在时态，前半句应保持时态一致，使用一般现在时“buy”。

× Yes, I have both shoes online twice.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online twice.

“have both shoes”语法错误，应为现在完成时“have bought”，表示过去发生的动作对现在有影响。

× Honestly, I don't usually spend a lot of money on shoes because I only buy a new PE pair about two or three times a year.

✓ Honestly, I don't usually spend a lot of money on shoes because I only buy a new pair about two or three times a year.

“PE pair”中的“PE”无意义，应去掉，正确表达为“a new pair”。

× This way I can make.

✓ This way I can save money.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词和宾语，导致表达不清，应补充完整。

× However, when I doing sports or exercising, I always choose comfortable shoes to protect my feet.

✓ However, when I am doing sports or exercising, I always choose comfortable shoes to protect my feet.

“when I doing”缺少助动词“am”，正确结构为“when I am doing”，表示现在进行时。