Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但存在语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: Yes, I love buying shoes and usually purchase a new pair about once a month. This habit began in high school when we had to wear plain uniforms, so shoes were my way to express individuality.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并避免口头语。

예시: Yes, I have bought almost all my shoes online. For example, the pair I am wearing now was purchased online. They are comfortable, stylish, and sometimes I feel they bring me good luck.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁表达原因，并避免重复。

예시: I usually spend between 800 and 3000 RMB on shoes. Since I enjoy jogging, I prefer shoes with good support and performance. Also, wearing well-known brands gives me a sense of satisfaction.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意单复数和搭配。

예시: I think both fashionable and comfortable shoes are equally important. I like to look good, so I prefer stylish shoes, but comfort is essential since shoes support my whole body.

× Uh, this habit started back in my high school.

✓ Uh, this habit started back in my high school days.

“my high school” 需要加上“days”来表示“高中时期”，否则表达不完整。

× At that time, we need to wear uniforms.

✓ At that time, we needed to wear uniforms.

描述过去的习惯或状态时，动词应使用过去时态。

× So shoes become the only way to show our individuality.

✓ So shoes became the only way to show our individuality.

这里描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时态“became”，且主语“shoes”是复数，动词应与之对应。

× That's how I become shoe lover.

✓ That's how I became a shoe lover.

描述过去的事情，动词应使用过去时态“became”，且“shoe lover”前应加不定冠词“a”。

× In fact, I I've almost all my shoes online, uh, for example, the pair I wearing right now, uh, was purchased online, uh,

✓ In fact, I've bought almost all my shoes online, uh, for example, the pair I'm wearing right now was purchased online, uh,

“I I've almost all my shoes online”结构不正确，应为“I've bought almost all my shoes online”。“the pair I wearing”缺少动词，应为“the pair I'm wearing”。

× They are all comfortable, stylish, and sometimes can take some good luck for me.

✓ They are all comfortable, stylish, and sometimes can bring me some good luck.

“take some good luck for me”表达不自然，应改为“bring me some good luck”。

× Usually 800 to UH-3000 RMB.

✓ Usually 800 to 3000 RMB.

“UH-3000”中的“UH-”是多余的，应去掉。

× Uh, most of my shoes are on expensive side things.

✓ Uh, most of my shoes are on the expensive side.

“on expensive side things”表达错误，应为“on the expensive side”。

× I'm really into jogging, so I need a pair with good conditioning and performances and all to be honest,

✓ I'm really into jogging, so I need a pair with good cushioning and performance, to be honest,

“conditioning”应为“cushioning”（缓冲），且“performances”应为不可数名词“performance”。

× wearing well known brand can take me a sense of satisfaction.

✓ Wearing a well-known brand can give me a sense of satisfaction.

“take me a sense”表达错误，应为“give me a sense”。且“well known brand”前应加冠词“a”，且“well-known”需连字符。

× That's basically how that's basically why.

✓ That's basically why.

句子重复，应简化为“That's basically why.”。

× But at the same time shoes is the basement of my whole body, so comfortable is essential.

✓ But at the same time, shoes are the base of my whole body, so comfort is essential.

“shoes”是复数，动词应为“are”。“basement”用词不当，应为“base”。“comfortable”是形容词，句中应使用名词“comfort”。