Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。可以用更自然的表达方式来描述购买鞋子的频率。

예시: I don't buy shoes very often. Usually, I only purchase new ones on special occasions like before the Spring Festival or when my old shoes are worn out.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意冠词和介词的正确使用，并且使句子更流畅自然。可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online many times because they are usually cheaper than in physical stores. However, I always try them on in shops first to make sure they fit well.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议注意介词和句子结构的正确使用，同时表达要简洁明了。可以更具体地说明价格范围和购买鞋子的考虑因素。

예시: I usually spend between CN¥500 and CN¥1000 on shoes. However, I focus more on the design rather than the price when choosing shoes.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确。建议注意单复数和句子结构的正确使用，同时用连接词使表达更流畅。可以更具体地说明为什么喜欢舒适的鞋子。

예시: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I often go to the gym to run. Therefore, shoes that fit well and provide comfort are very important to me.

× Or if my shoes is broken I will buy a new one.

✓ Or if my shoes are broken I will buy a new one.

shoes 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 are，而不是单数 is。

× Almost every shoes I would like to buy online because it is often cheaper than by owner shop, but I always try shoes on the shop before.

✓ Almost every pair of shoes I would like to buy online because it is often cheaper than buying from owner shops, but I always try shoes on in the shop before.

every 后面应接单数名词，shoes 是复数，需改为 every pair of shoes。

× Almost every shoes I would like to buy online because it is often cheaper than by owner shop, but I always try shoes on the shop before.

✓ Almost every pair of shoes I would like to buy online because it is often cheaper than buying from owner shops, but I always try shoes on in the shop before.

比较时应使用 buying from owner shops 而不是 by owner shop，且 try shoes on 后应加介词 in the shop。

× My shoes prices always between on CN¥500 and CN¥1000, but I always concentrate on the design.

✓ My shoe prices are always between CN¥500 and CN¥1000, but I always concentrate on the design.

prices 是复数，前面应使用复数谓语 are，且 between 后不加 on。

× My shoes prices always between on CN¥500 and CN¥1000, but I always concentrate on the design.

✓ My shoe prices are always between CN¥500 and CN¥1000, but I always concentrate on the design.

between 后不加介词 on。

× I don't care the prices, let my shoes.

✓ I don't care about the prices, as long as I like my shoes.

care 后应接介词 about，且句子结构不完整，需补充完整表达。

× I absolutely prefer the comfortable shoes because I always go to gym to run, so a comfortable and suitable shoes it suits for me.

✓ I absolutely prefer comfortable shoes because I always go to the gym to run, so comfortable and suitable shoes suit me.

shoes 是复数，前面不加冠词 a；go to the gym 需加定冠词 the；it suits for me 结构错误，改为 suit me。