Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, I do, but I wouldn't say I'm crazy about it. I usually buy new shoes every three or four months depending on the season. For example, I bought a pair of trainers last week because autumn was coming.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Yeah, I've tried that a few times, mostly for trainers or casual shoes. It's convenient, but sometimes the size doesn't perfectly, so I still prefer trying them on in a physical store.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I usually spend around 200 to 800 MB on a pair. I think that's reasonable for both durability and comfort. I don't supply on shoes.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I like them both. I like them both. When I'm going to school or work I wear comfortable shoes, but occasionally when I go out on a date or when to just up a bit I will wear fancy shoes.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答较自然且内容相关，但可以更简洁，避免冗余。建议开头直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持，句子不宜过长。
예시: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually purchase new ones every three to four months. For instance, I recently bought trainers to prepare for the autumn season.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答自然，但有语法错误（"size doesn't perfectly"应为"size doesn't fit perfectly"）。建议注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online a few times, mainly trainers or casual shoes. Although it's convenient, the sizes don't always fit perfectly, so I prefer trying shoes on in physical stores.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中出现了词汇错误（"supply"应为"splurge"），且表达不够清晰。建议使用准确词汇，并补充具体原因或例子。
예시: I usually spend between 200 and 800 MB on a pair of shoes because I value both durability and comfort. I try not to splurge too much on shoes.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答重复且有语法错误（"when to just up a bit"不通顺）。建议避免重复，注意语法准确，并用连接词使句子更连贯。
예시: I like both fashionable and comfortable shoes. Usually, I wear comfortable shoes to school or work, but I choose fashionable ones when I go on dates or want to dress up a bit.
문법
× sometimes the size doesn't perfectly
✓ sometimes the size doesn't fit perfectly
这里缺少动词，'doesn't'后面需要跟动词原形，表示否定。'fit'是正确的动词，表示尺寸合适。
× I don't supply on shoes.
✓ I don't splurge on shoes.
这里'supply on'用法错误，正确表达应该是'splurge on'，表示在鞋子上花费过多。
× when to just up a bit I will wear fancy shoes.
✓ when I just want to dress up a bit, I will wear fancy shoes.
句子结构混乱，缺少主语和动词，正确表达应为'when I just want to dress up a bit'，表示想要打扮一下时。
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