Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Uh, yes, I'm into buying shoes sometimes. I mean, whenever I need a pair of them, uh, I would definitely go for shopping, but uh, it's not on a regular basis. I mean, uh, I'm not uh, going to shop a pair of shoes, uh, on a regular basis.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Uh, yes. I have had, uh, one pair of shoes about, uh, two years ago, uh, online and, uh, to be honest with you, that wasn't a good experience because, uh, the size weren't OK. I mean, uh, when I received that, uh, I realized, uh, it is not suitable for me.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
Uh, well, I didn't consider the amount of money that I spend on shoes, but I can say that it's not that much. I mean, uh, because I didn't buy them, uh, frequently and just one or two pairs of shoes, uh, in a year that might be somehow, uh, reasonable.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
Uh, it definitely depends on the occasions. I mean, uh, whenever I decide to go for a brisk walking, for example, I prefer to, uh, to wear, uh, a convenient pair of shoes, a pairs of shoe, pair of shoes and uh, for a ceremony.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 65.0제안: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide a clear, concise answer with a topic sentence and supporting detail. For example, state your interest in buying shoes and how often you do it, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes occasionally. I usually shop for new pairs only when I need them, so it's not a frequent activity for me.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 70.0제안: Avoid excessive hesitation and filler words. Use a clear topic sentence followed by specific details connected with linking words. For example, mention when you bought shoes online and explain why the experience was negative with clear reasons.
예시: Yes, I bought a pair of shoes online two years ago. However, the experience was disappointing because the size did not fit me properly when I received them.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 60.0제안: Try to give a more precise answer with less hesitation. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'somehow reasonable'.
예시: I usually spend a moderate amount on shoes since I buy only one or two pairs each year. Therefore, my total spending is not very high.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 55.0제안: Complete your answer fully and avoid hesitation. Use a clear topic sentence and provide specific examples with linking words. Finish your thought to make the answer coherent and logical.
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes for activities like brisk walking because they provide support. However, for formal ceremonies, I choose fashionable shoes to match the occasion.
문법
× I prefer to, uh, to wear, uh, a convenient pair of shoes, a pairs of shoe, pair of shoes and uh, for a ceremony.
✓ I prefer to wear a convenient pair of shoes for brisk walking and a pair of shoes for a ceremony.
The phrase 'a pairs of shoe' is incorrect because 'pairs' is plural and 'a' is singular; also 'shoe' should be plural as 'shoes'. The correct singular form is 'a pair of shoes'. The sentence also had redundancy and unclear structure, so it was corrected for clarity and grammatical agreement.
× the size weren't OK.
✓ the size wasn't OK.
The subject 'size' is singular, so the verb should be singular 'wasn't' instead of plural 'weren't'. This is a subject-verb agreement error related to singular and plural forms.
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