Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Shoes. Not really. I usually buy shoes only when my old ones are damaged, which happens about once a year. I prefer to keep my shoes until they are completely worn out because I find it more practical and cost effective. Besides, I don't like spend.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Guests are nowadays the online shopping platform such as Tiktok shop or shopping are really popular in my country, so I also buy my personal items via them, uh, especially sourced.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I usually spend up to about 1,000,000 Vietnamese Dong on a pair of shoes because I don't think shoes are essential items that need to be very expensive. For me, comfort and durable tea are more important than brand name or style, so I prefer to buy a Fort.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because they allow me to walk or stand for long periods without feeling pain, for example, when I go sightseeing or run. Comfortable shoes help me stay active all day, although fashionable.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'I don't like spend' nên là 'I don't like spending money'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I don't really like buying shoes frequently. I usually purchase new ones only when my old shoes are completely worn out, which happens about once a year. I find this approach practical and cost-effective because it helps me save money.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 40.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh sử dụng từ không phù hợp như 'Guests'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.
예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. Online shopping platforms like TikTok Shop are very popular in my country, so I often purchase personal items, including shoes, through these websites because they are convenient.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 50.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'durable tea' và 'buy a Fort' khiến câu không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I usually spend around 1,000,000 Vietnamese Dong on a pair of shoes because I believe shoes don't need to be expensive. For me, comfort and durability are more important than brand names or style, so I prefer to buy sturdy shoes.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng câu cuối cùng chưa hoàn chỉnh và có vẻ thiếu ý. Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu cuối và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lặp từ và thêm ví dụ cụ thể hơn.
예시: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because they allow me to walk or stand for long periods without pain. For example, when I go sightseeing or running, comfortable shoes help me stay active all day, even if they are not very fashionable.
문법
× Besides, I don't like spend.
✓ Besides, I don't like spending.
The verb 'like' when followed by another verb should be followed by the gerund form (-ing). Here, 'spend' should be 'spending' to be grammatically correct.
× Guests are nowadays the online shopping platform such as Tiktok shop or shopping are really popular in my country, so I also buy my personal items via them, uh, especially sourced.
✓ Nowadays, online shopping platforms such as Tiktok Shop are really popular in my country, so I also buy my personal items through them, especially sourced ones.
The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear subject usage. 'Guests are nowadays the online shopping platform' is incorrect. The sentence should start with 'Nowadays, online shopping platforms...' to be clear and grammatically correct.
× I also buy my personal items via them, uh, especially sourced.
✓ I also buy my personal items through them, especially sourced ones.
The preposition 'via' is less common in this context; 'through' is more appropriate when referring to buying items using platforms. Also, 'especially sourced' is incomplete; it should be 'especially sourced ones' to specify the items.
× For me, comfort and durable tea are more important than brand name or style, so I prefer to buy a Fort.
✓ For me, comfort and durability are more important than brand name or style, so I prefer to buy a pair that is comfortable.
'Durable tea' is incorrect; the intended word is 'durability' (a noun). Also, 'buy a Fort' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; it should be replaced with a clearer phrase like 'buy a pair that is comfortable.'
× Comfortable shoes help me stay active all day, although fashionable.
✓ Comfortable shoes help me stay active all day, although fashionable shoes may look better.
The sentence ends abruptly with 'although fashionable,' which is incomplete. It needs a complete clause to compare comfortable shoes with fashionable ones properly.
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