Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，直接表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

예시: I don't like buying shoes very much. I usually buy only one pair each year because I think it's important to buy only what I need, not what I want.

제안: 表达不自然，有语法错误，逻辑不清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，清楚描述经历和感受。

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. However, the size didn't fit me, so I returned them. Since then, I don't trust buying shoes online.

제안: 回答内容不明确，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议明确表达花费金额，并解释原因，使用正确的词汇。

예시: I usually spend about $300 on shoes because good quality shoes are more expensive but last longer than cheap ones.

제안: 句子结构不够自然，表达略显重复。建议简洁表达偏好，并用原因支持，注意单复数一致。

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I only buy one pair a year, so comfort is more important to me than fashion.

× I always buy a pair of shoes every year because I consider that demand is more important than I want, so I will not waste money to buy very.

✓ I always buy a pair of shoes every year because I consider that need is more important than want, so I will not waste money buying too many.

这里'shoes'是复数，'a pair of shoes'已经表示一双鞋，后面不需要再用复数形式。'demand'用法不当，应改为'need'表示需求。'I want'应简化为'want'。'to buy very'表达不完整，应改为'buying too many'表示买太多。

× I bought the shoes online but the size didn't fit me.

✓ I bought the shoes online but the size didn't fit me.

该句时态正确，无需修改。

× Finally I returned the shoes and I trust I didn't bow the shoes online again.

✓ Finally I returned the shoes and I trust I won't buy the shoes online again.

'trust'后应使用将来时态表达未来意图，'didn't bow'拼写错误，应为'didn't buy'或更合适的'won't buy'。

× I usually spend $3000 on my shoes.

✓ I usually spend $3000 on my shoes.

该句无复数错误，保持原句。

× I saw that while material shoes are more expensive than general and it will more durable than others cheap shoes.

✓ I saw that high-quality shoes are more expensive than ordinary ones and they are more durable than other cheap shoes.

'material shoes'表达不清，应改为'high-quality shoes'。'general'应改为'ordinary ones'。'it will more durable'缺少动词，应改为'they are more durable'。'others cheap shoes'应改为'other cheap shoes'。

× I prefer comfortable shoes because I bought a pair of shoes once a year, so a more comfortable shoes is suitable on me than fashionable shoes.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I buy a pair of shoes once a year, so more comfortable shoes are more suitable for me than fashionable shoes.

'a more comfortable shoes'中'shoes'为复数，前面不应加'a'。'is suitable on me'应改为'are more suitable for me'。时态应与前文一致，'bought'改为'buy'。