Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with clear sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, say how often you buy shoes and why.

예시: I don't buy shoes very often because I try to use my current shoes until they are worn out. Usually, I buy new shoes once or twice a year.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Also, avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on in stores to ensure they fit well. However, I might consider buying online in the future if I find a reliable website.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, be specific about the amount or range you spend.

예시: The amount I spend on shoes depends mainly on their quality and type. For example, I usually spend around $50 to $100 on good quality shoes because I believe they last longer and are worth the price.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence.

예시: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes depending on the occasion. For daily use, I usually choose comfortable shoes, whereas for parties or formal events, I opt for stylish shoes that look elegant.

× Actually no, I've never bought a shoes online.

✓ Actually no, I've never bought shoes online.

The word 'shoes' is plural, so the article 'a' should not be used before it. 'A' is used only with singular countable nouns. Therefore, 'a shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes' without 'a'.

× But maybe I will try it in future and buy shoes online.

✓ But maybe I will try it in the future and buy shoes online.

The phrase 'in future' is incorrect in this context. The correct expression is 'in the future' when referring to a time that will come later. The definite article 'the' is necessary here.

× I most of the time I try to use all my shoes very clearly and also. Yes.

✓ Most of the time, I try to use all my shoes carefully.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Very clearly' is not appropriate here; 'carefully' fits better to express the intended meaning. Also, the sentence should be structured properly without unnecessary conjunctions or fragments.

× Certainly it depends on several issues, like the quality is so important for me.

✓ Certainly, it depends on several factors, like quality, which is very important to me.

The original sentence is awkward and lacks clarity. 'Issues' is better replaced with 'factors' in this context. Also, 'the quality is so important for me' should be rephrased to 'quality, which is very important to me' for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× And also it depends on the sort of the.

✓ And also, it depends on the type of shoes.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Sort of the' is incomplete; it should specify what is being referred to, such as 'type of shoes' to complete the thought.