Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks a direct response to the question. Try to start with a clear topic sentence answering the question directly, then add specific reasons using linking words. Also, avoid grammatical errors and redundancy.

예시: Yes, I like buying shoes quite often because expensive shoes usually provide better comfort for my feet. For example, when I wear good quality shoes, my feet feel supported and I can walk longer without pain.

제안: Your answer is very short and lacks detail. Try to expand your response by adding reasons or experiences using linking words to make it more natural and informative.

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online from Taobao because it offers a wide variety of styles at affordable prices. Moreover, shopping online is convenient as I can compare different options easily.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many fillers. Try to give a direct answer with specific details and avoid unnecessary pauses. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes because they are important for daily comfort. For instance, good shoes prevent my feet from getting dry or sore during long days.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and better grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and avoid repetition. Also, use correct forms of words and sentence structures.

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is essential in daily life. When I feel comfortable, I can work efficiently. Therefore, comfortable shoes are more important to me than fashionable ones.

× How often I like buying shoes because if you buy a expensive shoes this this, they will be able to comfort in your foots and this is so good because your foot will be OK if you wear expensive shoes and good shoes and.

✓ I like buying shoes often because if you buy expensive shoes, they will be comfortable for your feet, and this is very good because your feet will be okay if you wear expensive and good shoes.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'foots' instead of 'feet' and has awkward pronoun usage like 'they will be able to comfort in your foots'. The correct plural form of 'foot' is 'feet'. Also, pronouns should clearly refer to the correct nouns. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I bought a shoes online from Taobao.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes online from Taobao.

The phrase 'a shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. The article 'a' should be removed to correctly indicate plural 'shoes'.

× I spend so much money on my shoes because, uh, the shoes is very, umm, good thing for your daily, daily life.

✓ I spend so much money on my shoes because, uh, shoes are a very good thing for your daily life.

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'the shoes' is less natural here; simply 'shoes' is better. The sentence was corrected for subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× It's so good if you wear in foot and your foot will be not, umm, dry or an.

✓ It's so good if you wear them on your feet, and your feet will not be dry or uncomfortable.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to wearing shoes on feet. Also, 'wear in foot' is incorrect; it should be 'wear them on your feet'. The sentence was rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think the comfortable shoes is very good because comfortable comfort is a main part of your daily life.

✓ I think comfortable shoes are very good because comfort is a main part of your daily life.

'Shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'comfortable comfort' is redundant; 'comfort' alone suffices. The sentence was corrected for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× If you are feeling comfort, you will be able to do all work.

✓ If you feel comfortable, you will be able to do all your work.

'Feeling comfort' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'feel comfortable'. Also, 'do all work' is vague; 'do all your work' is clearer. The sentence was corrected for proper adjective use and clarity.

× If you don't feeling comfort so you will be not able to do much work.

✓ If you don't feel comfortable, you will not be able to do much work.

'Don't feeling comfort' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'don't feel comfortable'. Also, 'you will be not able' is awkward; 'you will not be able' is correct. The sentence was corrected for verb form and word order.

× So that's that's why I comfort shoes is more good than fashionable.

✓ So that's why comfortable shoes are better than fashionable ones.

'I comfort shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable shoes'. Also, 'is more good' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'are better'. The sentence was corrected for subject-verb agreement, adjective use, and comparative form.