Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'prefer save money' nên là 'prefer to save money'. Bạn cũng nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I don't do it very often because I prefer to save money and spend it on other important things.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn, ví dụ như 'because' hoặc 'since'. Ngoài ra, câu 'buying shoes on a store' nên sửa thành 'buying shoes in a store'.

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but I prefer buying them in a store because I can try them on before purchasing.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'a film Millions Vietnam down'. Bạn nên nói rõ số tiền và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng. Ngoài ra, câu cuối nên sửa thành 'because good shoes make me feel more comfortable when I wear them'.

예시: I usually spend around five million Vietnamese dong on shoes because good shoes make me feel more comfortable when I wear them.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'I will fall comfortable shoes' và 'it make my food are'. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và sử dụng cấu trúc đúng, ví dụ 'I prefer comfortable shoes, especially when I have to walk a lot or stand for a long time because they protect my feet.'

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes, especially when I have to visit many places or stand for a long time because they protect my feet and keep me comfortable.

× I love buying shoes but I don't buy shoes often because I prefer save money and spend more money for many things.

✓ I love buying shoes but I don't buy shoes often because I prefer saving money and spending more money on many things.

The verbs 'prefer' and 'spend' should be followed by the gerund form (-ing) when expressing preference or habitual actions. Also, the preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'on' should be used to indicate expenditure. Therefore, 'prefer save money' should be 'prefer saving money' and 'spend more money for many things' should be 'spend more money on many things'.

× I love buying shoes but I don't buy shoes often because I prefer save money and spend more money for many things.

✓ I love buying shoes but I don't buy shoes often because I prefer saving money and spending more money on many things.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used to indicate the purpose of spending money. The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to spending money on items or things.

× Yes, I have bought shoes online. However, I prefer buying shoes on a store. This is because buying online I cannot try them.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online. However, I prefer buying shoes in a store. This is because when buying online, I cannot try them on.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to a physical location like a store. The correct preposition is 'in'. Also, 'buying online I cannot try them' is awkward; adding 'when' and 'on' after 'try them' clarifies the meaning.

× I usually spend a film Millions Vietnam down for buying shoes. Umm because a good shoes can make me feel more comfortable when I use it.

✓ I usually spend a few million Vietnamese dong on buying shoes. Umm, because good shoes can make me feel more comfortable when I wear them.

The phrase 'a film Millions Vietnam down' is incorrect and likely a mistranslation; it should be 'a few million Vietnamese dong'. 'A good shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; it should be 'good shoes' without 'a'. Also, 'use it' is incorrect for shoes; the correct verb is 'wear them'.

× I will fall comfortable shoes. Especially when I need to go to many destinations or stand a long time because it make my food are.

✓ I will choose comfortable shoes, especially when I need to go to many places or stand for a long time because they make my feet hurt.

'Fall comfortable shoes' is incorrect; likely intended 'choose comfortable shoes'. 'Many destinations' is better expressed as 'many places'. 'Stand a long time' needs the preposition 'for'. 'It make my food are' is incorrect; 'it' should be 'they' (plural for shoes), 'make' should be 'make', and 'food' is a typo for 'foot' or 'feet'. The sentence is corrected to express the intended meaning clearly.