Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Oh definitely, I'm a big fan of sport shoes because I like play table tennis with my friend, so I need to buy some good quality sports shoes to play table tennis.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Theft delays. I often buy shoes online. Just last week I buy a pair of. I bought a pair of UH sports shoes from the UH online store because I believe they offer good quality products.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I usually spend around $1000 on buying shoes because I believe that good quality shoes are very important to play table tennis. For example, I pair 4 shoes with a pink color and beautiful paintings.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I like confident shoes because I always do some outside sports and Internet sports. For example, I love running and table tennis so confidence shows a a more use for than fashionable shoes.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“like play”应为“like to play”，且句子较长且重复“play table tennis”，建议简化表达并注意语法准确性。
예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially sports shoes, because I often play table tennis with my friends and need comfortable footwear.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中出现无关词汇“theft delays”，且时态混用（“buy”应为“bought”），句子不连贯，建议去除无关内容，注意时态一致，并使句子更流畅。
예시: Yes, I often buy shoes online. Just last week, I bought a pair of UH sports shoes from their official online store because I trust their quality.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中“pair 4 shoes”表达不清且有语法错误，金额较大但未解释清楚，建议明确表达购买数量和原因，避免语法错误。
예시: I usually spend about $100 on shoes because I believe good quality shoes help me play table tennis better. For example, I own four pairs in different colors and designs.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答中“confident shoes”应为“comfortable shoes”，且“Internet sports”表达不清，句子结构混乱，建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达观点。
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often do outdoor sports like running and table tennis, so comfort is more important than fashion.
문법
× I like play table tennis with my friend, so I need to buy some good quality sports shoes to play table tennis.
✓ I like playing table tennis with my friend, so I need to buy some good quality sports shoes to play table tennis.
动词like后面应接动名词形式playing，而不是动词原形play。动词+动名词是固定搭配。
× Just last week I buy a pair of.
✓ Just last week I bought a pair of.
表示过去发生的动作，动词buy应使用过去式bought。
× I often buy shoes online. Just last week I buy a pair of. I bought a pair of UH sports shoes from the UH online store because I believe they offer good quality products.
✓ I often buy shoes online. Just last week I bought a pair of UH sports shoes from the UH online store because I believe they offer good quality products.
句子中“Just last week”表示过去时间，buy应改为过去式bought，且句子不应断开。
× I pair 4 shoes with a pink color and beautiful paintings.
✓ I have 4 pairs of shoes with pink color and beautiful patterns.
“pair”是单数，数量词4应与复数“pairs”搭配；“paintings”用在鞋子上不合适，改为“patterns”更准确。
× I like confident shoes because I always do some outside sports and Internet sports.
✓ I like comfortable shoes because I always do some outdoor sports and internet sports.
“confident”是形容人有自信，形容鞋子应使用“comfortable”；“outside sports”应为“outdoor sports”。
× For example, I love running and table tennis so confidence shows a a more use for than fashionable shoes.
✓ For example, I love running and table tennis, so comfortable shoes are more useful than fashionable shoes.
句子结构混乱，使用了错误的词“confidence”，应为“comfortable shoes”；“a a more use for”不合语法，改为“are more useful”。
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