Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误，表达不够自然。建议你直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明原因，避免重复和冗长。可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I don't like buying shoes very often, maybe once every six months. I think the most important thing about shoes is that they should be comfortable because I wear them mainly for walking.

제안: 回答时要注意语法和用词的准确性，避免重复。可以用连接词使句子更流畅。建议用更自然的表达方式说明网上购物的便利。

예시: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it's very convenient. I don't need to go to the store and try many pairs; I just choose the shoes I like and buy them directly from the internet.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清楚的问题。建议直接回答问题，并用具体理由支持。避免重复和不必要的停顿。

예시: I usually spend about 100 to 200 RMB on a pair of shoes because I don't want to spend too much. If I don't like them, I can just throw them away.

제안: 回答时要注意语法和句子结构，避免重复。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体理由支持，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because we wear shoes mainly for walking. Even if shoes look beautiful, they are useless if they are not comfortable.

× I don't like buying shoes maybe half year once because I think should the most important thing about shoes it's suitable.

✓ I don't like buying shoes, maybe once every half year, because I think the most important thing about shoes is that they are suitable.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing words, making it unclear. The phrase 'maybe half year once' should be 'maybe once every half year' to express frequency correctly. Also, 'should the most important thing about shoes it's suitable' is ungrammatical; it should be 'the most important thing about shoes is that they are suitable.' This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It's the shoes is for walking, so I must wear the shoes I always wear.

✓ Shoes are for walking, so I must wear the shoes I always wear.

The phrase 'It's the shoes is for walking' has subject-verb agreement errors and unnecessary words. 'Shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'It's the' is unnecessary here. The corrected sentence uses proper subject-verb agreement and clearer structure.

× I bought shoes online all the time 'cause with the in Internet development online shop is very convenient.

✓ I buy shoes online all the time because with the development of the Internet, online shopping is very convenient.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and articles: 'with the in Internet development' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'with the development of the Internet.' Also, 'bought' should be 'buy' to indicate habitual action. This correction fixes preposition use and verb tense.

× I don't have to go to the shop and try every everyone, I just choose the shoes I want and I love and buy it from Internet it.

✓ I don't have to go to the shop and try on every pair; I just choose the shoes I want and love and buy them from the Internet.

The phrase 'try every everyone' is incorrect; it should be 'try on every pair.' Also, 'buy it from Internet it' is ungrammatical; 'buy them from the Internet' is correct. Pronouns must agree in number with their antecedents, and prepositions like 'on' are needed with 'try.' This correction addresses these issues.

× I think, uh, maybe 100 or 200 RMB of of a pair of shoes 'cause I think I don't have pay too much time on them because I, if I don't like wear them, I can just throw them to garbage.

✓ I think maybe 100 or 200 RMB for a pair of shoes because I don't have to spend too much on them; if I don't like wearing them, I can just throw them in the garbage.

The phrase '100 or 200 RMB of of a pair of shoes' is incorrect; 'for a pair of shoes' is correct. Also, 'pay too much time' is wrong; it should be 'spend too much.' 'Throw them to garbage' should be 'throw them in the garbage.' These corrections fix quantifier use, verb collocations, and prepositions.

× It's definitely comfortable shoes 'cause I think we people people use shoes just for walking.

✓ I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I think people use shoes just for walking.

The phrase 'It's definitely comfortable shoes' is ungrammatical; 'I definitely prefer comfortable shoes' is correct. Also, 'we people people' is redundant; 'people' suffices. This correction improves pronoun and subject usage.

× If you feel not very comfortable the the no useful of the shoes if just look so beautiful, but I still think it's no use.

✓ If you don't feel very comfortable, the shoes are useless even if they look beautiful, but I still think they are of no use.

The original sentence has pronoun and article errors: 'the the no useful of the shoes' is incorrect. It should be 'the shoes are useless.' Also, 'if just look so beautiful' is incomplete; 'even if they look beautiful' is correct. 'It's no use' should refer to 'they are of no use.' This correction clarifies pronoun references and article use.