Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn để câu trả lời mạch lạc và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes, especially brands like Nike and Adidas. I usually spend time browsing online stores about twice a week to find new pairs.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I am never buy' và nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Actually, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer shopping in stores. It's usually cheaper, and I can try the shoes on to make sure they fit well.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

예시: I usually spend around $100 on shoes because I believe comfortable shoes are worth the price. Paying more ensures better quality and comfort.

제안: Bạn nên cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách liên kết câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'small' và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng.

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because although fashionable shoes look better, comfort is more important to me. When I wear comfortable shoes, my feet don't hurt, and I can walk easily.

× I am a person who keen on buying shoes, especially Nike shoes or Adidas, and I spend time, I spend time surfing the Internet to buy shoes about twice a week.

✓ I am a person who is keen on buying shoes, especially Nike shoes or Adidas, and I spend time surfing the Internet to buy shoes about twice a week.

The verb 'keen' needs the auxiliary verb 'is' to form the correct present participle phrase 'is keen on'. Also, the repeated phrase 'I spend time' is redundant and should be removed for clarity.

× Uh, frankly speaking, I am never buy shoes online.

✓ Uh, frankly speaking, I never buy shoes online.

The phrase 'I am never buy' is incorrect because 'am' is not used with the base verb 'buy' in present simple tense. The correct form is 'I never buy'.

× I keen on buying shoe at the shop because it's more cheap.

✓ I am keen on buying shoes at the shop because they're cheaper.

The noun 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to match the context. Also, 'more cheap' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'cheaper'.

× I can see and try to the shoes.

✓ I can see and try the shoes.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary after 'try' in this context. The correct phrase is 'try the shoes'.

× I'm spend about $100 buying shoes because for me choosing comfortable shoes see that.

✓ I spend about $100 buying shoes because, for me, choosing comfortable shoes is important.

The phrase 'I'm spend' is incorrect; it should be 'I spend'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'is important' clarifies the meaning.

× If you want to buy com comfortable shoes, you have, uh, pay the expenses price.

✓ If you want to buy comfortable shoes, you have to pay the expensive price.

The word 'com' is a typo and should be removed. 'Expenses price' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'expensive'.

× Small uh fashionable shoes is look more good but I am need to wear comfortable shoes to go out so I can feel good and my leg uh never hurt when I wear comfortable shoes.

✓ Small fashionable shoes look better, but I need to wear comfortable shoes to go out so I can feel good and my legs never hurt when I wear comfortable shoes.

'Small uh fashionable shoes is look more good' has multiple errors: 'is' should be removed for subject-verb agreement, 'more good' should be 'better', and 'am need' should be 'need'. Also, 'leg' should be plural 'legs'.