Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Actually, I'm not, uh, really into buying shoes, umm, I often buying shoes when I need it and, umm, because I'm, uh, I don't like, follow fashion trends, umm.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
Of course, I often bought shoes online because I think it's very convenient, I can compare with the prices and the bread, but it can't try on shoes online.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I usually spend the large amount of money on shoes umm, around UH-1000 RMB because umm, I think the expensive shoes are usually have. Are you really comfortable and umm.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
As for me, I prefer to the umm, comfortable shoes because it can use long term and umm, it's always has the good quality and uh, always practical.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中有较多的语气词和语法错误，影响表达的流畅性和自然性。建议减少填充词，注意动词时态和语法结构，使回答更简洁自然。
예시: I don't really like buying shoes often. I usually buy them only when I need new ones because I don't follow fashion trends.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当（如'bread'应为'brand'），且句子结构不够连贯。建议注意时态一致性，使用正确词汇，并用连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it's very convenient. I can compare prices and brands easily, although I can't try them on before buying.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整且含糊。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，避免语法错误。
예시: I usually spend about 1000 RMB on shoes because I believe expensive shoes are more comfortable.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达，影响流畅性。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使用更准确的表达。
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because they last longer, have good quality, and are practical.
문법
× I often buying shoes when I need it and, umm, because I'm, uh, I don't like, follow fashion trends, umm.
✓ I often buy shoes when I need them, and, umm, because I'm, uh, I don't like to follow fashion trends, umm.
动词后面接动名词形式（buying）错误，应该用动词原形（buy）表示习惯动作；另外，'need it'中的'it'应改为复数'them'，因为指鞋子。'like'后面接动词时应使用不定式'to follow'。
× I often bought shoes online because I think it's very convenient, I can compare with the prices and the bread, but it can't try on shoes online.
✓ I often buy shoes online because I think it's very convenient; I can compare the prices and the brand, but I can't try on shoes online.
句中时态不一致，'often'表示习惯动作，应使用一般现在时'buy'而非过去时'bought'。另外，'compare with the prices and the bread'中'with'多余，应直接用'compare the prices and the brand'。'bread'应为'brand'。'it can't try on shoes'主语错误，应为'I can't try on shoes'。
× I usually spend the large amount of money on shoes umm, around UH-1000 RMB because umm, I think the expensive shoes are usually have. Are you really comfortable and umm.
✓ I usually spend a large amount of money on shoes, umm, around 1000 RMB because, umm, I think expensive shoes are usually really comfortable, umm.
'the large amount'应改为'a large amount'，表示泛指大量。'UH-1000'应为'1000'。'are usually have'结构错误，应改为'are usually really comfortable'。句子不完整，需调整使其通顺。
× As for me, I prefer to the umm, comfortable shoes because it can use long term and umm, it's always has the good quality and uh, always practical.
✓ As for me, I prefer comfortable shoes because they can be used for a long time, and, umm, they always have good quality and are always practical.
'prefer to the comfortable shoes'中'to the'多余，应直接用'prefer comfortable shoes'。'it can use long term'主语错误，应为'they can be used for a long time'。'it's always has'结构错误，应为'they always have'。句子中代词应保持一致，指代复数鞋子用'they'。
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