Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
I don't really enjoy buying shoes because trying them on often makes me feel uncomfortable. Uh Joe to uh foot condition I have. Because of this I usually only buy a new pair once a year.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
I've never done that umm because of my feet condition and I really need to try them on and walk with them to understand it is OK for me or it is suitable for me or not.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I usually don't spend much money on shoes because I only buy a new pair once a year. I prefer to invest in a good quality pair that lasts all year, so I end up spending a reasonable amount, but not very often.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I prefer constable shoes that fit well because I wear them throughout the year. They are suitable for various occasions like such as sports events and festivals and work where comfort is essential. Fashionable shoes might look nice, but I value comfort. Mars.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 70.0제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'Joe to uh foot condition'. Also, make your answer more concise and clear by directly stating your reason and frequency without redundancy.
예시: I don't enjoy buying shoes because I have a foot condition that makes trying them on uncomfortable. Therefore, I usually buy a new pair only once a year.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 65.0제안: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more concise.
예시: I have never bought shoes online because, due to my foot condition, I need to try them on and walk around to make sure they fit well.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 85.0제안: Your answer is clear and well-structured. To improve, you could use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence.
예시: Since I buy shoes only once a year, I usually don't spend a lot of money. However, I prefer to invest in a high-quality pair that lasts throughout the year, so I spend a reasonable amount but infrequently.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 60.0제안: There are some pronunciation or word choice errors like 'constable' instead of 'comfortable' and unclear ending 'Mars'. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow with linking words.
예시: I prefer comfortable shoes that fit well because I wear them all year round. They are suitable for different occasions, such as sports events, festivals, and work, where comfort is essential. Although fashionable shoes look nice, I prioritize comfort.
문법
× Uh Joe to uh foot condition I have.
✓ Due to a foot condition I have.
The phrase 'Joe to' is incorrect and seems to be a mishearing or typo. The correct preposition to express cause is 'due to'. Using 'due to' properly connects the foot condition as the reason for discomfort.
× I really need to try them on and walk with them to understand it is OK for me or it is suitable for me or not.
✓ I really need to try them on and walk with them to understand whether they are OK for me or suitable for me.
The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'shoes', which is plural. The correct pronouns should be 'they' and 'them' to match the plural noun 'shoes'. Also, 'whether' is used to introduce alternatives, improving clarity.
× I prefer constable shoes that fit well because I wear them throughout the year.
✓ I prefer comfortable shoes that fit well because I wear them throughout the year.
The word 'constable' is incorrect here; the intended adjective is 'comfortable' to describe shoes that provide comfort. Using the correct adjective improves meaning and clarity.
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