Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
수험생
Yes, I like buying shoes. I buy shoes per month or twice a month. I love buy shoes because it's a comfortable. I'm buying a Snickers and love them so I have many.
시험관
Have you ever bought shoes online?
수험생
No, I haven't because I, I'm afraid of that. My shoes can be delivered maybe small or uncomfortable, but I am uh, pleasing my sister and uh, she uh, bought me shoes, uh, which she online delivered.
시험관
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
수험생
I usually spend money on shoes approximately uh 10,000 or 15,000 Armenian drum uh, I think it's, it's good price, not expensive, not cheap, it's good.
시험관
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
수험생
I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. I think your clothes need to be, uh, both fashionable and comfortable because it's necessary, Uh, but at the times I prefer comfortable shoes.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
점수: 55.0제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, specify the type of shoes and use linking words to make your answer coherent.
예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase them once or twice a month. For example, I recently bought some sneakers because they are comfortable, and I already have several pairs that I really like.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
점수: 50.0제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains hesitations. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain your reasons clearly using linking words. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure.
예시: No, I have never bought shoes online because I am worried they might not fit well or be uncomfortable. However, my sister has bought shoes online and gave them to me as a gift.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds and be more precise with vocabulary.
예시: I usually spend around 10,000 to 15,000 Armenian drams on shoes. I think this is a reasonable price because the shoes are neither too expensive nor too cheap.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by reducing hesitations and making the structure clearer. Use linking words to contrast your preferences and provide reasons.
예시: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable because I believe both aspects are important. However, if I have to choose, I usually prefer comfortable shoes for everyday use.
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