Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda tekrar eden kelimelerden kaçının ve daha doğal ifadeler kullanmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, cevaplarınızı daha akıcı ve mantıklı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes. I usually visit the shopping mall about once a week to look for new pairs because I like to keep my collection updated.

제안: Cümlenizde bazı kelimeler yanlış kullanılmış ve cümle yapısı karışık. Daha açık ve doğru ifadeler kullanarak, cümlelerinizi daha anlaşılır yapmalısınız.

예시: No, I have never bought shoes online because I don't trust the internet for purchasing new items. Instead, I prefer to visit the shopping mall to try and examine the shoes before buying.

제안: Cevabınızda kelime hataları ve belirsizlikler var. Daha net ve doğru kelimeler kullanarak, cümlenizi daha anlaşılır hale getirin. Ayrıca, gereksiz duraklamalardan kaçının.

예시: I haven't really thought about it, but I usually spend around 1000 Turkish lira on shoes because they have become quite expensive these days.

제안: Cümlenizde bazı kelime hataları var (suits yerine shoes). Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot, so wearing comfortable footwear is very important for me to avoid discomfort.

× I love buying buying shoes.

✓ I love buying shoes.

The repetition of the word 'buying' is a typographical error. Only one 'buying' is needed to correctly express the action in the present participle form.

× I don't trust Internet to purchase new items.

✓ I don't trust the Internet to purchase new items.

The noun 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the global network. Omitting 'the' is incorrect in this context.

× Instead, I prefer to go to the shopping mall and examine the shoes I think to.

✓ Instead, I prefer to go to the shopping mall and examine the shoes I want to buy.

The phrase 'I think to' is incomplete and unclear. The correct expression is 'I want to buy' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I didn't think uh, how much I supply spent for food, but it might be uh, around UH-1000 Turkish uh, lira because these days Zeus is so so expensive.

✓ I didn't think about how much I usually spend on shoes, but it might be around 1000 Turkish lira because these days shoes are so expensive.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'supply spent for food' is incorrect; 'supply' should be 'usually' and 'for food' is irrelevant. 'Zeus' is a mispronunciation of 'shoes'. Also, 'didn't think' should be followed by 'about'. The corrected sentence uses proper past tense and vocabulary.

× I I prefer comfortable suits because I walk a lot so without comfortable shoes this might be so difficult for me.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot, so without comfortable shoes, it would be very difficult for me.

The word 'suits' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes'. Also, the sentence needs commas for clarity and 'this might be so difficult' is better expressed as 'it would be very difficult' to match the context.