Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答很自然且内容丰富，但有一个小错误，'old shares' 应该是 'old shoes'。此外，可以用连接词使句子更连贯，比如使用 'because' 来连接原因。

예시: Actually, I don't really enjoy buying shoes very often because I prefer to save money and avoid unnecessary shopping. I usually only buy a new pair when my old shoes are completely worn out, which happens about once or twice a year.

제안: 回答内容清晰，但 'return them back' 中 'back' 是多余的，应该只说 'return them'。此外，'That's very terrible' 可以用更自然的表达，如 'That's quite frustrating'。

예시: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times because it is convenient and saves me a lot of time. However, one problem is that I cannot try the shoes before buying them, so sometimes they do not fit me well. I need to return them, which is quite frustrating.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，'a good quality and stylish shoes' 应改为 'good quality and stylish shoes'，且 'last to live longer' 表达不自然，建议改为 'last longer'。

예시: I usually spend about 500 to CN¥600 on shoes because I think the price is reasonable for getting good quality and stylish shoes. I don't believe it is necessary to buy more expensive ones since they do not always last longer or look better.

제안: 回答中有表达不清和拼写错误，如 'Fashionable shoes mean to recognize' 不明确，'waking' 应为 'walking'。建议改为更清晰的表达，并注意拼写。

예시: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I often go hiking and it's very important to wear shoes that fit well and support my feet. Fashionable shoes may look good, but if they are uncomfortable, they can cause pain, especially when I spend a lot of time walking or climbing.

× I usually only buy a new pair when my old shares are completely worn out, which happens about once or twice a year.

✓ I usually only buy a new pair when my old shoes are completely worn out, which happens about once or twice a year.

The word 'shares' is incorrect here; the correct plural form referring to footwear is 'shoes'. This is a singular and plural issue where the wrong plural noun was used. To improve, use the correct plural noun that matches the context.

× I need to return them back.

✓ I need to return them.

The phrase 'return them back' is redundant because 'return' already implies 'back'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions. To improve, avoid using redundant prepositions after verbs that already imply direction.

× I usually spend about 500 to CN¥600 on shoes because I think the price is reasonable for getting a good quality and stylish shoes.

✓ I usually spend about 500 to CN¥600 on shoes because I think the price is reasonable for getting good quality and stylish shoes.

The phrase 'a good quality and stylish shoes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'shoes'. This is a singular and plural issue. To improve, remove the singular article when referring to plural nouns or adjust the noun to singular.

× I don't believe it is necessary to buy more expensive ones since they do not always last to live longer or look better.

✓ I don't believe it is necessary to buy more expensive ones since they do not always last longer or look better.

The phrase 'last to live longer' is incorrect; 'last' should be followed directly by 'longer' without 'to live'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions. To improve, use the verb 'last' correctly by omitting unnecessary prepositions.

× Fashionable shoes mean to recognize, but if they are uncomfortable they can cause pain, especially when I spend a lot of time waking or climbing.

✓ Fashionable shoes are meant to be recognized, but if they are uncomfortable they can cause pain, especially when I spend a lot of time walking or climbing.

The phrase 'mean to recognize' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'are meant to be recognized'. Also, 'waking' is a typo for 'walking'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and word choice. To improve, use correct verb forms and correct spelling for clarity.