Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并且避免无意义的词汇。

예시: I don't buy shoes very often. Usually, I buy new shoes only when my old ones are worn out.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，且句子结构混乱。建议使用连贯的句子，清楚表达原因，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: No, I haven't bought shoes online because the sizes are often inaccurate. Sometimes the shoes are too big or too small, so I prefer buying them in stores.

제안: 回答中数字表达不清楚，句子结构不完整。建议直接回答问题，使用准确的数字和时间表达，并且句子要完整。

예시: I usually spend about 3000 yuan on shoes each year. I buy new shoes every three months.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子不够连贯，重复用词较多。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并且用具体理由支持观点。

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes because I am a student and need to walk a lot. Fashionable shoes might look good, but comfort is more important for me.

× Actually not I when I buy shoes because my shoes was broken and so I usually buy shoes for UH1UH-3 amounts and I will buy it.

✓ Actually, I don't buy shoes often because my shoes were broken, so I usually buy shoes in small amounts and I will buy them.

句子结构混乱，主语和谓语顺序错误，导致句意不清。应调整语序，使句子符合英语表达习惯。

× my shoes was broken

✓ my shoes were broken

shoes是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式were，而不是was。

× I usually buy shoes for UH1UH-3 amounts and I will buy it.

✓ I usually buy shoes in small amounts and I will buy them.

amounts应与buy搭配使用，且buy的宾语shoes为复数，指代时应使用复数代词them。

× Actually I'm not because when I bought the shoes online and sometimes the size are not real is sometimes worse, uh, bigger or smaller than my feet.

✓ Actually, I don't because when I buy shoes online, sometimes the sizes are not real; sometimes they are bigger or smaller than my feet.

使用了错误的时态和模态动词，且句子结构不完整。应使用一般现在时表达习惯，且调整句子结构使其完整。

× sometimes the size are not real

✓ sometimes the sizes are not real

size应使用复数形式sizes，因为指的是多双鞋的尺码。

× So I didn't buy online shoes.

✓ So I don't buy shoes online.

根据上下文，表达的是习惯性行为，应使用一般现在时而非过去时。

× In a whole year I will spend a like 3000 on my shoes.

✓ In a whole year, I spend about 3000 on my shoes.

句子结构不自然，使用了不正确的时态和表达方式，应使用一般现在时表达习惯性动作，且调整表达使其更自然。

× Just like 03 months I will buy new shoes.

✓ I buy new shoes every three months.

“Just like 03 months”表达不正确，应使用every three months表示频率。

× I need one. Shoes can make me feel comfortable because I think sometimes fashion fashion one was maybe not very useful.

✓ I need shoes that can make me feel comfortable because I think sometimes fashionable ones may not be very useful.

“one”用法错误，且重复“fashion fashion”，应使用复数形式和正确的形容词形式。