Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and avoid repetition. For example, mention how often you buy shoes and your preference clearly within 3-4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy two or three pairs every few months. Recently, I bought some new shoes in the past few weeks because I needed them for work and casual wear.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is not very clear. Use correct verb forms and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer shopping in physical stores. I like to try shoes on before buying them to ensure they fit well. Therefore, I usually visit shops casually to buy shoes.

제안: Your answer is quite good with clear details and coherence. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: I usually spend between ₹2000 and ₹3000 on shoes because I prefer investing in good quality footwear that lasts longer. Typically, I buy casual shoes or sneakers once or twice a year, depending on my needs. This approach helps me get comfortable and durable shoes without having to shop frequently.

제안: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct word forms and linking words to improve clarity and naturalness.

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I spend a lot of time walking or standing during the day. For example, when I go to work or travel, comfortable shoes help me avoid foot pain. Although fashionable shoes may look nice, I believe comfort is more important for my daily activities.

× No I don't bought shoes from online because I don't like online shopping.

✓ No, I haven't bought shoes online because I don't like online shopping.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'don't bought' which mixes present tense auxiliary 'do' with past participle 'bought'. The correct form is present perfect 'haven't bought' to indicate experience up to now.

× No I don't bought shoes from online because I don't like online shopping.

✓ No, I haven't bought shoes online because I don't like online shopping.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used with 'online'. The correct phrase is 'bought shoes online' without 'from'.

× I bought things as a casual to went shop and buy it.

✓ I usually buy things casually by going to the shop and buying them.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'As a casual to went shop and buy it' is incorrect structure. The correction uses proper adverb 'casually' and correct verb forms 'going' and 'buying'.

× I prefer comfortable shoes rather than faceable one because I spend a lot of time walking or standing during the day.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I spend a lot of time walking or standing during the day.

The word 'one' is singular but refers to 'shoes' which is plural. Also, 'faceable' is a misspelling of 'fashionable'. The correction uses plural 'ones' to match 'shoes' and correct adjective.

× I prefer comfortable shoes rather than faceable one because I spend a lot of time walking or standing during the day.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I spend a lot of time walking or standing during the day.

The adjective 'faceable' is incorrect; the intended word is 'fashionable'. Correct spelling is necessary for clarity.

× Although fashionable shoes may look nice, I like comfort is more important for my daily activities.

✓ Although fashionable shoes may look nice, I think comfort is more important for my daily activities.

The sentence lacks a proper subject for 'is more important'. Adding 'I think' clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.