Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và ngữ pháp chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I'm not bought'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, ví dụ: "I don't buy shoes very often, maybe once or twice every six months."

예시: I don't buy shoes very often, maybe once or twice every six months because I prefer to use my shoes until they are worn out.

제안: Bạn nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp như 'more cheaper' là sai. Nên nói 'cheaper'. Ví dụ: "Yes, I have bought many shoes online because the selection is much wider than in physical stores, and I can take my time to look at different styles and check customer feedback before making a decision. Also, it's more convenient and cheaper."

예시: Yes, I have bought many shoes online because the selection is much wider than in physical stores, and I can take my time to look at different styles and check customer feedback before making a decision. Also, it's more convenient and cheaper.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và nội dung cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm một liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn, ví dụ như 'because' hoặc 'since'.

예시: I usually spend around CN¥300 on a pair of shoes because I prefer comfortable and durable ones rather than luxury brands, since I think as long as these shoes are stylish and suitable for different occasions, that's good enough for me.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh như 'when good when I go out'. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ: "It depends on the situation. I prefer comfortable shoes when I'm working because they help me feel relaxed and concentrate better. However, when I go out to socialize, I choose fashionable shoes because they boost my confidence and make a good impression."

예시: It depends on the situation. I prefer comfortable shoes when I'm working because they help me feel relaxed and concentrate better. However, when I go out to socialize, I choose fashionable shoes because they boost my confidence and make a good impression.

× I like shoes, but I'm not bought shoes quite often, around one or two times half a year.

✓ I like shoes, but I don't buy shoes quite often, around one or two times a half year.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm not bought' which mixes present continuous and past participle forms. The correct present tense negative form is 'I don't buy'. This is a Present tense issue (ID 6).

× around one or two times half a year.

✓ around one or two times a half year.

The phrase 'half a year' needs an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct. This is an Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) related to article usage in time expressions.

× I bought a lot of shoes online before because I think the selection is much wider than physical storage.

✓ I have bought a lot of shoes online before because I think the selection is much wider than physical stores.

The use of 'bought' is past tense, but the context suggests a past experience relevant to the present, so present perfect 'have bought' is more appropriate. Also, 'physical storage' is incorrect; it should be 'physical stores'. This is a Past tense issue (ID 5) and Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× I can tell my time looking at different styles and check customer feedback before I made the decision.

✓ I can spend my time looking at different styles and checking customer feedback before I make the decision.

The phrase 'tell my time' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'spend'. Also, after 'can', the verb should be in base form or '-ing' form for parallelism. 'Check' should be 'checking' to match 'looking'. 'Made' should be 'make' to keep present tense consistent. This is a Verb + -ing form issue (ID 8) and Past tense issue (ID 5).

× Also it's more cheaper.

✓ Also it's cheaper.

'More cheaper' is a double comparative, which is incorrect. 'Cheaper' alone is the correct comparative form. This is an Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs issue (ID 13).

× I prefer comfortable shoes when I'm working because they help me feel relaxed and allow me to concentrate my work better.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes when I'm working because they help me feel relaxed and allow me to concentrate on my work better.

The verb 'concentrate' requires the preposition 'on' before the object. This is an Incorrect use of prepositions issue (ID 11).

× However, when good when I go out to socialize, I choose fashionable shoes because they boost my confidence and make a good impression.

✓ However, when I go out to socialize, I choose fashionable shoes because they boost my confidence and make a good impression.

The phrase 'when good when' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the extra 'when good' corrects the sentence structure. This is a Sentence structure error (ID 26).