Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够完整且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达喜欢买鞋的原因，并说明购买频率。

예시: Yes, I like buying shoes because I enjoy having comfortable and stylish footwear. I usually buy new shoes every few months.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，且表达重复，建议使用正确时态并避免重复。

예시: Yes, I often buy shoes online because the internet is a very convenient way to shop.

제안: 表达不清晰且语法错误较多，建议直接说明通常花费并简要说明原因。

예시: I usually spend about CN¥200 on shoes because I have a limited budget and need to control my expenses.

제안: 回答未完整，句子未结束，建议完整表达偏好并给出具体理由。

예시: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I believe good quality shoes are worth the investment, even if they are more expensive.

× Yes, I really like buying shoes because I want to wear a comfortable and new shoes I purchase shoes about.

✓ Yes, I really like buying shoes because I want to wear comfortable and new shoes. I purchase shoes about.

句子中“a comfortable and new shoes”中“shoes”是复数，前面不应该用不定冠词“a”，应去掉“a”以保持单复数一致。

× Yes, I always bought shoes online because I think Internet is a very convenient way to buy anything, so I often buy shoes online.

✓ Yes, I always buy shoes online because I think the Internet is a very convenient way to buy anything, so I often buy shoes online.

句子中“always bought”使用了过去时，但“always”表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“always buy”。

× Yes, I always bought shoes online because I think Internet is a very convenient way to buy anything, so I often buy shoes online.

✓ Yes, I always buy shoes online because I think the Internet is a very convenient way to buy anything, so I often buy shoes online.

“Internet”前应加定冠词“the”，因为“the Internet”是固定搭配。

× Where I usually stand about CN¥200 on my shoes because I don't have too much money to purchase shoes, so I must restrict my expenditure.

✓ I usually spend about CN¥200 on my shoes because I don't have too much money to purchase shoes, so I must restrict my expenditure.

“stand about CN¥200 on my shoes”中“stand”用错，应使用“spend”表示花费。

× Where I usually stand about CN¥200 on my shoes because I don't have too much money to purchase shoes, so I must restrict my expenditure.

✓ I usually spend about CN¥200 on my shoes because I don't have too much money to purchase shoes, so I must restrict my expenditure.

句子开头的“Where”无意义，导致句子结构错误，应去掉。

× I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes. For example, I like to invest in good quality shoes even if they cost a bit more, because I think this good quality should.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes. For example, I like to invest in good quality shoes even if they cost a bit more, because I think good quality is important.

句子末尾“because I think this good quality should”不完整，缺少谓语，导致句子结构错误，应补充完整表达。