Shoes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免重复表达，同时注意句子结构的完整性。可以适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes quite often because different occasions require different types. For instance, I prefer trainers when traveling since they are more comfortable.

제안: 注意语法错误，如比较级的正确使用；避免重复表达“online”。可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I often buy shoes online because there is a wide variety available, and prices are usually lower than in physical stores. Moreover, it's very convenient as I can shop from home.

제안: 回答中语法时态不一致，表达不够简洁。建议使用更准确的时态和简洁的句子结构。

예시: I usually spend between 500 and 800 RMB on shoes. I prefer not to buy luxury brands because I find shoes in this price range comfortable and suitable for me.

제안: 句子结构混乱，重复使用“comfortable shoes”，表达不够简洁。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连接词。

예시: Although fashionable shoes have their advantages, I prefer comfortable shoes because I can wear them for long hours at work without feeling tired.

× Personally I'm a person who really like to buy different types of shoes because I think if you take part in different occasions you need to wear different shoes.

✓ Personally I'm a person who really likes to buy different types of shoes because I think if you take part in different occasions you need to wear different shoes.

主语是单数（a person），谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式likes，而不是like。

× if you want to travel to another places, you need to wear the trainers because they are more comfortable.

✓ if you want to travel to another place, you need to wear the trainers because they are more comfortable.

another后面应接单数名词place，而不是复数places。

× the price in the online shops are more lower than in the physical shops.

✓ the price in the online shops is lower than in the physical shops.

price是单数，谓语动词应使用is而不是are；more lower是错误的比较级表达，应直接用lower。

× I never spent a lot of money on buying shoes and I think the shoes on that price are very comfortable and suitable for me.

✓ I never spend a lot of money on buying shoes and I think the shoes at that price are very comfortable and suitable for me.

此处表达习惯用现在时表示经常性行为，故用spend而非spent；介词用at搭配价格，而非on。

× although these two types of shoes are all have their own advantages, but for myself, I prefer the comfortable shoes because it's very comfortable for me to wear the comfortable shoes to work for a long time and it's hard to feel tired if you wear the comfortable shoes and.

✓ although these two types of shoes both have their own advantages, for myself, I prefer comfortable shoes because it's very comfortable for me to wear them to work for a long time and it's hard to feel tired if I wear comfortable shoes.

although和but不能同时使用；all have用法不当，应改为both have；句子末尾and无意义，应删除；重复使用the comfortable shoes可用代词替代，避免冗余。